Board Thread:Naruto Fanon's Review Board/@comment-25771248-20150626104839/@comment-26576038-20150626181410

SO ONCE AGAIN. I love that you pay so much attention to appearance and background and personality off the back. You're one of few people on the site who seeingly figures out their characters motives before all else. Which is extremely skilled.

The negatives are short cause its really just the one thing. Which is the same song different player situation. Another five element user with a connection to indra or Ashura. Like it becomes the same story over and over and over and over. I feel as if something new isn't being done. That you'r ereally just giving them the SAME powers and SAME ABILITY. Honestly, if three of your characters are on most of the same jutsu...It's a problem.

Also, you create a crutch. Your character isn't strong becaause of you. They're strong because Kishimoto. Because you're depending on characters Kishimoto made (Indra ashura). I feel like, by doing that...they become weaker. They aren't independent. You want your characters to be strong because of them. Because they work for it.

That's really all i have to say. Maybe limit the jutsu count. Find a specialization. more description for abilities. That's it honestly.