Thread:Shifūha/@comment-25778192-20150303171857/@comment-7040990-20150303174141

You require to have a complete introduction and abilities sections.

I'd also advise to expand more on how he precisely awakened the Sharingan, how it evolves to the Mangekyo Sharingan and how he can gains the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan (from what I got from reading his background, the awakenings seem to be very bare and quite unrealistic).