Thread:Berserkchart486/@comment-24660483-20151206182754/@comment-4869113-20151207034101

Well, the major suggestion is to narutofiy the page. You draw a lost of inspiration from a lot of lore, but half of the things you used don't exist in Naruto. I say, choose one lore to go with, and gradually insert it into the Naruto world, but it has to make sense. That's number one.

Formatting is something we'll teach you over time. So don't worry too hard. It's just small issues like not putting two equal signs instead of three. That's no issue.