Thread:Kazeyo/@comment-408684-20131202184802/@comment-1520269-20131202213405

There are a few issues that seem to not only disqualify this application, but also demonstrate its lack of necessity. The first is that Elemental KG are composed of two base elements, which the Shadow Release is not. As it does possess the "Release" tag, it much be elemental in nature, and thus needs to be composed of other natures.

Next, you note the ability to combine Dark Chakra with other elements to strengthen their potential. Wouldn't this make the KG "Dark Chakra" and not "Shadow Release," since it's the atypical property your character would be displaying?

After that, you mention some drawbacks...which seem reasonable until you describe the way of circumventing them. If dark chakra is the damaging property, why would sealing more dark chakra into the individual alleviate symptoms? Additionally, what is a dark chakra network? Using different types of chakra doesn't make the chakra network become something else altogether.

Finally, I don't think the Nara need something like a KG, considering they are more than capable with their hiden. It comes of as randomly tacking on another ability to the clan without any reasoning behind it.

Good luck.