Thread:Great Achlus/@comment-25208144-20170516034541/@comment-12180476-20170516163513

Pretty good so far. A few grammatical errors though those should go away with time as you fall into a rhythm once more. The question remains of Nukumi's existence. If they do not know of her (as you stated at the beginning) how do they know of her now? I figured the big reveal would come with Nukumi's appearance considering her mother took pains to dispose of her. Even though she has her father's eyes, she's not immediately identifiable as the offspring of the Raikage. Unless a sensor is involved, one who is familiar with the Raikage and his signature.