Thread:Ω kaiser Σ/@comment-5008297-20120417025429

I'm new to this editing thing and sharing my ideas so I was wondering if you or one of the other Admins could look over my clan, kekkai genkai, and jutsu that I made to see if there needs to be any corrections, alterations, or anything along those line. If you would do this I would be greatly appreciative. These are just first drafts and will be cleaned up and modified. My Kekkai Genkai is called: Honshitsu Kirikae (sorry, it's kinda a lot of info) My Clan is called: Kiwari Clan My Jutsu is called: Essence Conversion Jutsu I used all of the appropriate forms for each section and did my best to format it properly. I just would like a experienced opinion on the whole thing. 