Board Thread:Naruto Fanon's Review Board!/@comment-25208144-20150530045156/@comment-3030647-20150531001758

Abilities: It's not a bad section, believe me. You've described things well and whatnot. However, my qualm is the actual nature of her abilities. Like (quite a few) characters on the site, Senjou, while you've given her a distinct specialty (her Kekkei Genkai/Touta) you...seem to branch away from that considerably. While I understand that she had mentors and whatnot, the fact of the matter is...even as a Ninjutsu specialist, she has access to Five of the Eight Gates? Frankly speaking, wouldn't this shift her specialization over to Taijutsu? In addition, Creation Rebirth. Again, that is the pinnacle of Medical Ninjutsu. Adding in both of these "pinnacles" on top of her traditional Ninjutsu skills seems to cheapen both of them, in my opinion. Moreover she has Space-Time Ninjutsu skill as well. Frankly speaking, these abilities seem to detract from her focal abilities which, in turn, make them seem like excessive additions, frankly. Otherwise, I do enjoy her Sage Mode skills and Kekkei Genkai/Touta skills. So, my only real suggestion about this section is to reconsider which direction you really want Senjou to take, and capitalize on those skills in favor of others.