Talk:Takashi Kazami

I'd like to point out a few things. One being his traveling life, as I told you in the PM the Kazami clan are only reserved to Ryūgakure in attempts to hide their unique prowess. I have no personal problem, but travelers aren't their Motto seeing they are all loyal to each other and want to stay together in order to keep their clan united and not fall like Uchiha. Second, the grammar on this isn't the best. This being run on sentences, unneeded words as well as a the lack of complex words. This is my first time actually reading this article.

If you don't want to fix these things especially the first, I'd like him removed from the clan. If you need ANY help with the second one I'd be glad to do so. Don't take this as a personal attack, I just want the Kazami Clan at their best. I'd also like for no one else to bud in on this, as it is World and my ordeal thanks.

--EmperorSigma (talk) 11:36, October 18, 2013 (UTC)