Thread:KingJupiter/@comment-3030647-20141115231708

Alright, I need to address this with you. As the administrator who manages content and so-forth, my initial reaction to this technique is an immediate no.

Why, you may ask? The following reasons:
 * There is no justification whatsoever as to how the technique is a Kekkei Mōra-based expansion of the Six Paths Sage Technique.
 * The widely disconnected abilities that don't fit with each other. I mean, you have absolutely no connection to the Six Paths Sage Technique with this particular rendition; a clear example of this is the amphibious adaptation and so forth. Furthermore, all of these abilities are clearly physical enhancements and adaptations, which is not the main point of the Six Paths Sage Technique, as you can clearly tell by Naruto's enhanced chakra sensory, his ability to interfere with Rinnegan techniques, augmented quantities of chakra as well as the signature ability of creating Truth-Seeking Balls.
 * Your Sharinnegan also makes little sense contextually, especially the abilities of time-stopping and space-time distortion.

With all of these reasons put together, I am giving you a week's time to fix this article up and bring it up to a sufficient standard that demonstrates some level of abiding to canon. If you don't, it will be deleted. 