Thread:Nisshou/@comment-4576631-20120723145521/@comment-1399043-20120731152127

This power is too much, "They will gain absolute control over their chakra points and will be able to manipulate another's chakra system, allowing one to control how much chakra the victim uses in their attacks making them weaker or completely backfire on them. At this point the user's chakra can take any form it wants and their strongest dojutsu are usually almost humanoid in appearance and it has become fully solidified and visible. This stage is the most difficult to obtain as one must be at absolute peace with oneself by letting go of all of one's fears, grudges and doubts, and accepting the imperfections of not only themselves but everything in the world around them." and I know Ive done something similar but my power requires contact with the opponent to control their chakra, and then the other jutsu I made is a kinjutsu which blinds my user in return for the ability to cause the opponents chakra to basically bleed out their chakra into the environment. But it takes time, your power just asserts dominance which i am not sure if that is completely possible without direct contact also reading the page it still has four states not three as I see Magatama, Kyuukyoku and Mugen plus the base level Mejingan. Sorry for being such a pain about this but Power for the sake of power in terms of Dojutsu normally leads to one trying to outclass the Sharingan/Rinnegan/Byakugan which are stated to being the top three in the world.