Thread:SixpathsofSamoa/@comment-1399043-20120705180141/@comment-5173115-20120714160146

hey bro so i changed it up i took ur advice and instead of being the oh he was just out the village at the time i set it up where he was staking out in Yamagakure trying to silence a small uprising sect of the Foot clan of his enemy Tamotsu Yukimura... he was sent by the 3rd hokageonyl becuase he had expeirnce dealing with this enemy he and his team were captured and separated to minimize the chances of escape... however he was captured and held prisoner until his brother was sent and assigned to see what happened, it picked up the trail rescued his brother and his teammates and from there defeated and quelled the small uprising and when they returned it was  3-5 days after the Clan massacre..... they returned and found what was left of their living situations met sasuke in the Shrine who told them the truth of what happened to the clan ...... Is this good... I can think of another situation if need be but i want your opionion on this if its to cliche or acceptable