Thread:EmperorSigma/@comment-16832686-20131127020603/@comment-16832686-20131127032724

So those are my main three things. Bases, Explanation, and Gluttony. Now for Iris, I don't need to write a lot because those three guides and feelings for go to EVERY CHARACTER EVER MADE. There is also weakness, but you should discuss that with someone else. To me, weakness is letting your character get hit. I do that a lot. I don't brag, I just take it.

Now Iris. She is fourteen with all this shit. She needs a basis. She needs explanation, She also needs permission and she needs to be trimmed. A better character is a trimmed character, so think on it.