Thread:Dedmnwalkn88/@comment-28437044-20160708184009/@comment-25436862-20160709033420

So, I'll be straight with you. Your Waia Uchiha page has a LONG way to go. It's just not very good. Now, I don't want to discourage you at all, I've been writing since elementary school and am currently a writing major in college, and there are still people here that are just better writers than me. So always look to improve and better yourself as a writer.