Board Thread:Specific Characters Qualification Exam/@comment-4080775-20141218230531/@comment-4080775-20150107203418

What you wrote: "Appearance: 0/5 The section answers why. Very unorganized, didn't follow the manual of style."

What's on her page:

"APPERANCE SECTION Younger Attire During her childhood, Shiro wore a long sleeved white shirt with black trim around the cuffs with a single split. On top of it, was a black vest, accompanied by a goldish-yellow bow under her shirt collar. Over her leggings was a pleated skirt with a 2-2 type pattern, similar to that of a scottish kilt. Under her skirt were purplish black stockings with red and white striped shows with a gold buckles. Tying up her hair in the back was a large black bow.

Older Attire Shiro is a young slim woman with a curvaceous figure. She has long red hair tied by a pony tail. and wears a red dress, which goes a little bit below her knees. Under the dress she wears a skirt accompanied by a black shirt, that is mostly covered by the dress. A notable feature is the red jewel located at the top of her dress. She also wears long white armbands, which is also accompanied by black wristbands. She wears black leggings accompanied by red boots. She also has mark is located on her right hand. She also has a long scar on her back, which she was born with and such scar is kept covered by her clothing. Due to both of her kekkei genkai, she began growing a tail at a young age. The tail is strong enough to knock down medium sized trees; though she has such control over it that she is able to deflect a kunai with a rock. It has hair on it that's red in appearance. The color of this changes as she changes her appearance."

Like you got to work with me here. Clothing is almost never a question at all, its about detail, and I even provided links to similar clothing.