User blog comment:Wolfthorn/Assemble!/@comment-30807545-20140604223525/@comment-24984058-20140607195414

I see you used my old images. Not bad. One thing though: he is a Jinchūriki. The only reason that I want to shy away from Jinchūriki is that the storyline could easily go either way. The Shinju could be defeated which would kill the other Tailed Beast and then our storyline would make no sense since it takes place after the Fourth Shinobi world War.

The other thing I see are all them Chakra natures... I would say focus on either Cloud or Ice Release, either of which would be awesome on their own. You see, I want to start everyone off on a lower level so that we can develop them up to a grander scale.