Board Thread:Fanon Canon 2/@comment-2001574-20140921163723

1. Please indicate which of the following dōjutsu you are applying for.


 * Rinnegan

'''2. How will your character awaken this dōjutsu? Do they meet all the canon requirements? How so?'''


 * (Lots of text incoming) Every night since Kisui was born, he saw visions in his sleep; Visions of a young man with pale red hair and striking eyes showing the world the concept of Ninshuu. Every time he dreamed of it, he dreamed he was that man. They were dreams that he witnessed all his life, but couldn't put them into words. Every dream was of him as the same man, doing all sorts of different things, things not even the ancient spirit within him could put into words. When he fled to Sunagakure after Kumogakure placed a large bounty on his head for leaving the village with a powerful technique, his negative emotions began to slowly build up, sort of dragging him back to his old ways. After months of the negative emotions, he felt tired of them, and learned of a Sage deep in the deserts that surrounded Sunagakure. After days of traveling, he found the ruins the Sage of the Sands called home. Kisui consulted the Sage of the Sands, Anubis, to teach him Sage mode, hoping it would serve to rid him of his negative emotions.

After several months of meditation, he began to learn that the man in his dreams was Hagoromo Ootsutsuki, the Sage of the Six Paths. He spoke to Anubis about these dreams, wondering why they filled his sleepful nights. Anubis pondered on this, and came with the theory that those who are reincarnated from someone often have dreams of their past, the things they did. Anubis began to believe the troubled young man who wanted only to relieve himself of his intense negative emotions, may indeed be the reincarnation of Hagoromo himself.

Kisui couldn't really find himself to believe it. He didn't consider himself to be important enough to be reincarnated from one of the most powerful individuals in the Shinobi world. Why would he be the reincarnation of Hagoromo when someone even more powerful could have been chosen? The Sage came to the conclusion that reincarnation isn't always a precise path, and that it could be entirely a game of chance. But with Kisui's goals set so firmly with peace, it seems that the reincarnation had brought more than just dreams to the young and new Sennin. Regardless, Kisui still took the conclusions to heart and kept them locked in his mind, believing that maybe, deep down, he is Hagoromo's reincarnation. The first time he went into Sage mode during his training, he definitely felt some sort of ancient energy surfacing into him, almost like it was trying to break free.

Over time, Kisui began feeling that same power again every time he went into Sage mode. Eventually, his physical attributes began to change, slowly forming a different face. Eventually, he began to see in his reflection the man in his dreams; Hagoromo, but at the same time, he still had his own physical properties, like his black hair. He disregarded it at first, but over time, he felt something building up within him, something powerful. He was concerned about what it was, but he did his best to keep his mind off of it. Then, when he went into Sage mode again, something happened; As if a bubble burst, his body felt an explosion of energy. Painfully, his eyes began to change, concentric lines began to paint themselves over the eyes, turning his blue eyes purple. The Rinnegan was awoken.

This didn't come without its consequences though. Kisui described the Rinnegan's awakening as the most painful experience in his life. His eyes were literally erased while the Rinnegan tool hold, changing his eyes to a pale white sclera, while a pigment of purple began to spread to the eyes and the circles came into light. He described the event as "Having acid poured into my eyes while someone took a senbon and slowly carved out the circles." Still trying to come to terms with what happened, his body initially kept trying to reject the massive amounts of energy within. His mind also tried rejecting the memories of the Sage. Mentally, he had no idea who he was anymore as his mind struggled to process the memories of Hagoromo along with his own.

His body underwent severe spasms that sent shocks of pain throughout his entire body, leaving him unable to move. It wasn't until a Sunagakure native making their way back to the village who saw him and brung him to his home was he able to rest. For days, he was unable to move without his body undergoing severe spasms as it tried to adapt to the energy within him. He still had no memory of who he was, his mind still trying to process both memories at the same time. He felt like he was drained as his chakra began weakening, as if it was the only thing willing to accept the changes. The chakra from Hagoromo could not go through, though, not until his body accepted the energy. Looking in a mirror, he saw the intense, purple eyes of the Rinnegan, wondering just who he was.

For days, he wandered Sunagakure, seeing people he once knew being nothing but a blur in his memory. Day in and day out, it was the same thing; Not knowing who he was and still dealing with the bodily spasms. After two weeks, his memory slowly started coming back and the bodily spasms had ceased; His body finally accepted the Sage's energy into Kisui's energy. The more he walked through Sunagakure, the more his memory began to recover. Eventually, he finally remembered who he was; Kisui Iyoku, formerly of Kumogakure, now of Sunagakure. And he was still on a journey; to find Shima Date once again. Finally, his memories bonded with Hagoromo's, and he began seeing what the Sage once did in his life, as if he lived those memories himself. Finally, his chakra accepted Hagoromo's chakra, and his body's reincarnated transformation was complete.

'''3. Briefly detail what your plans are, at the moment, for your character if he/she is approved for the selected dōjutsu? What will they do with it? How will they improve or utilize it in a fashion that is unique to them, rather than a rehash of canon character usage or maybe even other fanon characters?'''


 * Well, a lot of what he's going to do with the Rinnegan is already on his page, but to put it simply, he's usage of the Rinnegan is unique in that he manages not only to use it in a way that's unique to him, but also manages to find a plethora of non-combat applications he can use his Rinnegan for. 