User blog comment:MasterMachine/HELP ME!/@comment-1141084-20110213182858

Hello MasterMachine, I'm going to help you here so bare with me. Your articles as a whole are not bad, they are unique and not overpowered. While you did read the Manual of Style, you seem to forget that appearance of the article is one of the most important things. No offense to Uzu, but he is not a person you should take advice from. He has had troubles worse than yours in the past. Seireitou was not coming off as rude, and he did speak for alot of us.

I'm going to use Akemi as an example. I look at him and I don't see any problems. Your articles alone don't seem Naruto-like, but as something I can't even describe. Your lack of using the functions of wikia such as Bolding or Italic both of which are an assortment of ' (these little guys) makes it long bland an unintersting.

To your character, your writing of their appearance is quite poor saying things like "knives sheaths and knives", why do I need to know about the sheaths of the knives? To your jutsu, you just seem to be naming words "Bladestorm" and "Water Blades", but you fail to actually mention the logistics of the techniques. If you look in Naruto, how often do jutsu come off like that?

In Akemi's Infobox you write "Everwinter Highlands", I can only say WTF. That is strayed from canon and cause for deletion technically. This "rudeness" you are being shown is something you should be happy with as most of the time admins would just nuke your articles and be on their merry way. You have the potential, within this month this site has gotten alot of new users who are in fact Terrible.

To add to this, your way of doing pages is annoying to some users as it is very poorly done. "Shinobu Family/Past" for example, just make an article entitled Shinobu Family. Use the three equal signs to make the heading for history, abilities, etc. Also with the naming of your characters "Shinobu Family/Akemi" we are an english wikia therefore the proper naming would be "Akemi Shinobu".