Thread:EmperorSigma/@comment-16832686-20131127020603/@comment-16832686-20131127031256

Chapter Two: Explanation

This chapter will be shorter because it is important but easier to deliver. It also connects to Bases and the next, Do You Really Need It?

So i went to a law high school because I wanted to be a lawyer. And the first thing my favorite teacher taught me, well one of the things is why Lawyers are successful....it's because they are class A Bullshitters. And that makes you think. When you make a character, you do not want to Bullshit. If you have to bullshit, then it isn't worth it. I find you have some good explanations for how you got some things, but others, it's like NO,NO,NO,NO you didn't even try. I have a golden rule;

"If I have to bullshit a reason; I don't need it.

So I want you to think about that. If you have to bullshit a reason, is it really worth it? This also goes into RPing. One of my pet peeves is when I RP and i write like a paragraph or two, and someone writes a sentence.....That PISSES ME OFF TO NO FUCKING END. Explain that shit. If your character has gas, Explain it, If he think someone got a fat ass, EXPLAIN IT. On IMVU, there were groups that literally would not allow you to rp if you only wrote sentences. This gets rid of misunderstanding, and it also shows a respect for the person. I spend time working on it and you send me this? Like no bueno! If someone is writing some deep shit, you write some deeper shit.

AND GUESS WHAT!?! JACK!!!

When you explain during RP's, the more looser connections are more likely to be overlooked. Explanation is key to building your Idea Tree. To be a civilization a society must have a written language. USE THAT SHIT MOTHERFUCKER!!!!!! And it also turns the bitches on. Bitches love guys who can write! Trust me!!!!!!!!!!!! I remember we were talking about voices in my advance English class, Active and Passive Voice. And the teacher said, how would you say "She's attractive." One kid said, "She is beautiful." ANd I said, "Her presence radiates a heavenly glow." And i had like ten girls dripping wet in their seat (They just said aw). But still!!! USE THIS MAGNIFICENT THING WE CALL LANGUAGE. NO MORE OF THIS;

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 * Clone Snakes: He shouldn't have this because, back to base, there is no reason for it.

DESCRIBE SHIT BRO. We need that. USE THE FIVE W'S AND THAT MOTHERFING H Who: What: When: Where: Why: and How: And there should be a paragraph for each. if you can't just wait. I know you use the phone. WHat I do, if I can't post atm, I will write it in my head, phone, or notebook, and add on untill I can write it. By then, it's a giant kamehahamanahafafhajf wave of fucking awesomeness. I'm ending it here..