User blog comment:Berserkchart486/State of Union/@comment-3030647-20151015203800

I have to agree with everything this blog is saying, really.

Criticism is a good thing and on a wiki like this, should be more encouraged. While some people might feel insecure, ultimately by giving them constructive comments you are helping them more. Just, please don't start bashing their work while you're doing so. There's no point in saying you're going to help someone if you're just planning on making them feel ashamed for what they write.

With regards to length, I am also in agreement. While it's good to have detail, don't compromise clarity and readability for it. If you only need one paragraph to write something that you somehow make three paragraphs for...that's just a cover-up, isn't it? The point of detail is for you to flesh out what's there, not for you to photocopy the same words in ten different ways. (That's for your essays!)