Tale of a Wolf

Guys this is my first try and i dont know if this is the right way to make it, im using the SAO Novels style.

The Return
Was a sunny day in kirigakure, no mist, no waves in the sea.

“Why we have to train today ?” asked Yuno Yoshida.

“You need train now you became Chunin and I need too to become Jonin!” answered is brother Hotaka Yoshida

“And I heard he is coming back… when he comes I want to be ready to fight him…”

So they trained all day until Hotaka feel the Chakra of his friend and go running. At the entrance of the village came a mysterious ninja.

“Oh look is him, Shu Yudoku, the shinobi how left the village two years ago to revenge his clan” exclaimed the people how was in the street.

Suddenly the entrance caught fire, but not a normal fire, it was a blue fire, everyone in the street run out, “Is an invasion run for your life!”, next that a stone golem start attack Shu. Shu avoid the first attack and start making hand seals quickly, "Water Release: Wild Water Wave".

"You have to do better then this to kill me, Hotaka!" Yelling to his friend. "I know its you, blue flames, you are the only guy i know can do that!"

"Well well you got me, long time no see you, Shu... Let me say you are a little stronger beating my golem with a single shot, but you were not the only one to improve, look at my new technique!" Then quickly he start making his hand seals and breath deeper.

"Fire Release: Fire Wolves! And know what you say of that my stronger technique, now my wolfs can beat yours easy..."

"That was impressive but not good enough... Poison Release: Poison Wolfs!..."

After that both jutsus canceled to each other and both jumped to each other directions embracing then saying "Welcome home brother!"...