Board Thread:Specific Characters Qualification Exam/@comment-25983604-20150107003929/@comment-1875854-20150111020707

Appearance: 5

Personality: 16

History: 20

Abilities: 17

Grammar: 5, I didn't see any grammar problems that interfered with reading.

Questions: 145 points, just keep in mind there's other Uzumaki in Uzu, a lot actually, she and the ones she brought back are by far not the only ones.

Total: 208, you failed by 2 yes but it's not to be mean, there's some underlying problems/fixing to do. How did she learn to use multiple KG? Yes, people can teach others, but you can't just "learn" KG, that kinda defeats the point of KG in the first place if anyone could learn them by having a teacher. Wasn't she only born with one? You don't really explain how she can learn multiple.

And then, how exactly did she reverse Minato's seals and learn FTG herself? It's possible, but how?

And then, I might have to talk to you about the Uzu war. And then how have her various experiences changed her, besides her feelings towards the village?

Good character, just needs some fixing up. Also, check the grammar a bit. I usually don't give low scores in this, it was just that it made some sentences not make sense at all in multiple places.

I do like Mia though, she seems very interesting