Talk:Bakuha Hakoda

Revisions
"As an adult, his personailty is almost the exact opposite. Instead of being hyperactive and childish, he is calm and collective ... He has ADD, making it hard to stay still."

Reviewer 1: This is a major contradiction of traits, and since there's no way to properly revise it, I suggest you find a way to change it for accuracy.

"Although he got excellent scores in Ninjutsu and Genjutsu, he failed miserably in Taijutsu. After his third try at graduating, he finally passed, having trained in Taijutsu endlessly."

Reviewer 2: I like this part. This character, shown by the quote, isn't relying on a talent or genetic ability to succeed. His hard work and perseverance is what drove him to where he is now, or at least to graduation.

Other than the two above, there are no comment on this article. Nice work.

--Cold hard steel will eat your soul... 23:16, January 2, 2011 (UTC)