Board Thread:Naruto: Crowning of Dawn Review Board/@comment-3030647-20170103003151/@comment-1364407-20170118183416

I would like to make two separate submissions for this category.
 * Shuten Dōji: One of the purposes for submitting this character is to create an economical, military and land expansion of the Land of Demons. He does not have any official titles other than his self-proclaimed “The Drunken Tyrant of the Land of Demons”.  However, the villagers recognized him as the Village Head. In short, he is akin to base commander in his own right and justifies his reasoning’s by injecting fear into his people. On the other hand, no matter how ruthless he may seem to acts of insubordination, he clearly projects his goals towards his followers and makes them feel involved with his undertakings.


 * Gōzanze Myō-ōgakure: This village will be Shuten Dōji’s place of operations and will act more as military base to attribute the Land of Demon’s expansion. The history is not quite complete yet, but it is in the workings. Though the shinobi that travel near or inhabit the village fear Shuten Dōji, they do however, maintain a moderate lifestyle through controlled agriculture, highly organized village functions and consistent employment (brewery, arms, maintaining Ghost Army fragments).

If there is anything that I would need to change in order for the two submissions to be accepted, please let me know. Thank you.