Thread:Sainami/@comment-6673974-20140420220840/@comment-5963425-20140425131804

I’ll advice you to lessen the functions of the technique. Rehash it, think it through and word exactly what you want the genjutsu to do for you.
 * Ryojin: I disagree with the concept of Ryojin. “It cannot be frozen and can douse any flames, even the flames of Amaterasu.”
 * Amaterasu is supposed to be the strongest flame that cannot be doused by any nature. It burns seven days and nights before it extinguish, with it being stronger when the sun shines high in the sky. So, even Ryojin would not successfully cancel Amaterasu out.
 * Side note: This is based off the mythology of Amaterasu and the affinity that the Uchiha have towards the fire nature.
 * Amaterasu is the strongest fire technique, yet it can easily be dodged or be stopped. If it is aimed at your clothes, take it off and you will be fine. Step aside and you will dodge the flame. Unless someone has Blaze, this is quite common to have here.
 * Ryojin appears to be illogical compared to this. “It can absorb everything, it cannot be frozen and once the water touches the target, it is absolutely being absorbed by them.” And then you say you can do anything with them, you control them. How does that work? Why would the water allow you to control the target and why would it be absorbed by them?
 * I’d like to see a better concept of the Genjutsu Mangekyou technique. Right now I’ll certainly deny it, because I can’t comprehend what exactly you want to do, and how it would work.
 * Paralyzing, okay. Certainly Genjutsu paralyzes you, but what causes the body to stop moving? What kind of sense are you affecting through this?
 * Genjutsu shutting down nerves forever? Genjutsu can kill someone? No.
 * Taking a memory would cause your character to either be overloaded with information or shutdown of the impact that someone can suffer, especially memories of a ninja. Taking memories doesn’t mean you will learn how to do something immediately; it would cause confusion and other side effects. But it could allow you to easier learn something if you can learn it. Kekkei Genkai and Hiden are a no-no. Also, I would like more expansion on this.
 * I suggest straying away from the Susano’o concept. Or get a solid concept down of what you want.