Thread:Berserkchart486/@comment-3403804-20130417024412/@comment-3403804-20130420233222

Hoy, and yes, make sure to respond properly this time around. I'll give you a few notes here for you to pay attention to in this roleplay thus far.

1. Realistically, Sannoto is at a rather large disadvantage in regards to Fuyuki's first attack (the one which targets the nerves), for the following reasons. He's emotionally and psychologically agitated due having just witnessed a woman being wrongfully slaughtered infront of him. Secondly, Fuyuki's attack is being delivered from beneath him, and the size of the spikes are quite small, small enough that he most likely wouldn't be capable of seeing them beneath his feet, though they're no less potent despite that. There's also the fact that he doesn't know the extent of Fuyuki's abilities despite his ability to use water to a terrifying extent, and when we're on this subject, he's also not aware of the fact that Fuyuki can attack at this range with such precision, and once again, as soon as the mist comes into view, most would realistically brace themselves from attacks coming from Fuyuki's last position.

2. This is in regards to the speed at which Fuyuki's attacks are executed, as well as their succession. This would be the order: Ice Spikes > First Ice Dagger Wave > Genjutsu > Second Ice Dagger Wave > the rest of the Ice Dagger Waves. Each of these would happen between an interval of roughly half a second after one another, meaning that the pace of Fuyuki's attack sequence is very fast. The bolded attacks are those which Fuyuki would place "special" focus on, due to how they're meant to set Sannoto up for the slaughter.

3. Part of the problem you had with your previous post was that you didn't write much in regards to the Ice Daggers, you wrote just a very short passage about how he "deflected everything", when blocking or defending against something you must devote particular attention to it and treat it with respect. There was also the fact that you completely ignored the Ice Makibishi - now, here's an explanation about what those would do. As I mentioned in my post, they were created to restrict movement, and that is precisely what they'd do in that if Sannoto attempted to move out of the way from Ice Spikes or Ice Dagger Swarms, he'd probably step on these instead, which would produce similiar effects as that of the ice spikes, although less severe.

4. As for the Genjutsu, you had some difficulties determining how it works and what it'd do. Well, imagine that Sannoto is composed of water for a moment, imagine if all of his muscle tissue were replaced by water - that would disable all of Sannoto's physical functions. Indeed, it'd probably make it difficult for him to use even the internal functions of the Sage Fist, as to him, he's nothing but water. Now, imagine if his bone structure was turned into water as well, his insides would implode upon themselves as the way of the water that now composes his entire body would press down upon them. This would destroy his organs, and most likely be unbearably painful, without bone structure, organs or tissue, he'd eventually be reduced to nothing but a blob of goo. If this Genjutsu is allowed to go that far, it would probably incapacitate him on his own, by sending him into a coma, as the body would quite literally believe he's dead.