Board Thread:Rebirth: Story Time/@comment-1875854-20141109223021

This is where I'll post and highlight my idea for a plot in FC. Ten likes it I believe, asked for his permission beforehand. I realize I'm incorporating game and movie concepts, but I believe it does it in a unique way and can contribute to FC's overall story:

During the reign of the First Tsuchikage, Ishikawa, his officials were oppressing the public in ways he didn't expect. Saying this cause everywhere, and predicting it as a cause for the First World War, a member went to work. With a noble idea of helping the world by removing oppressors in mind, he uses his KG and to create puppets of powerful shinobi, including Fuyū (clone puppet of Muu) to help with this goal. Eventually having to escape to avoid capture, he turned himself into a puppet himself (full of his emotions) and took most of his important puppets with him. Later on, the puppets (give or take a few criminals, madmen, etc) would form a group called Itogiri (糸切り, Severing Strings) (Thanks to Ash for translation), their name a pun on their purpose: to sever the strings the leaders of the world use on their people to oppress and control them.

These noble notions would eventually become tarnished though, thanks to Hitokui. Watching from above, they would influence the negative emotions of the Rinha, creating another Zero Tails (I believe Dal said this once, credit to him). Creating dark chakra as well, the Rinha and puppets were slowly corrupted as long as the entire group. Now it serves as an organization desiring chaos (think, Red Lotus from Avatar. Credit to them. If you haven't seen/heard about them, it doesn't really matter. You don't need to know them to get the idea.) They aim for this chaos by killing all village heads, important figures, etc. Or buying them out, destroying their reps and presence from the world. So the world's natural order, disorder from long ago can reign again. This can also go with Sei's idea, since he wants to recreate Warring States. Since Hitokui wants bloody conflict, this is one way to get it. Having Zero Tails spearhead an organization of mass destruction meant to destroy everything.

Also, thanks to Ash, Prince and Ten for liking the idea in its initial stages from a "a criminal group of puppets controlled by a puppeteer master that no one knows" to this.


 * http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:125480 : Related to this.

I just wanted to see if the community liked it or not. You can leave your comments here. 