Thread:Shen Yi/@comment-26503587-20151124172815/@comment-26193148-20151124215006

It's all over the place. You need to get a single concept down, figure out the path you wanna take, and figure out the story. Coming up with powers and abilities is the easiest step. Tell me those three answers first. Why is he so powerful? Where does these powers come from? Why are they important? Who has influenced him?

Add a touch of humanity.