Thread:Sageman12345/@comment-3399149-20120622175658

Dude... This is incredibly flawed. First, you need to set up a template. Look at my jutsu (Bee Bomb Techniqe). You can see that I have a template at the side, you'll need that for your jutsu. Second, work on your spelling "Maunpatuion" isn't a word. Third, you may want to do something other than juts rip off Kabuto's jutsu. 