Board Thread:Fanon Canon: Applications/@comment-8914761-20140903015445/@comment-3030647-20140903065923

If we're talking about discussing ideas, I'd like to give some feedback into the content of Sigma's application. Despite how much I might dislike the concept of creating a new tree for a variety of reasons, I'll leave my personal opinion on the matter on one side and give some constructive criticism on this side.

Sigma, this is about the validity of the process Takigakure is going through in order to investigate the warscene of the Fourth Shinobi World War. You've stated that Takigakure immediately heads into the scene after the war without any other villages believing that it would be necessary. I'd like to point out that other villages would, very likely, have the exact same mindset as Takigakure had in that thought of yours. After all, virtually all of the Shinobi world has been crippled by this war. Despite the hesitancy in going in, forces like the ANBU of each village would still be present. Their leaders, new or old, would very likely send out operatives in order to retrieve precious information, samples and the like for experimentation and usage to bolster their military power.

You're also forgetting that Orochimaru, a very devoted scientist to experimenting upon the possibilities of powers displayed in the Fourth Shinobi World War, would still be active during the time after the war. While he might act inconspicuously, he might be one of the many independent factions who investigate the vast expanse of terrain that comprised the Fourth Shinobi World War.

Again, I do not mean to criticize or bash anyone in any which way. However, I'm just pointing the logical fallacies in what you're presenting and the inconsistencies you can revise in this application in order to make it something that is far more appropriate to the constructed Fanon Canon universe.