Thread:Shoshiki/@comment-25436862-20160706042740/@comment-25436862-20160707032425

Alright. So, my 100% honest opinion of Chinomu Nara. I certainly don't hate the character. The concept is intriguing, but without a history section to explain it I have to wonder how a member of the Nara Clan got involved with the Jashinists AND learned how to utilize Earth Grudge Fear (EGF). EGF also presents some issues, as we have a shinobi from the past that was applied that was said to have created the technique. So, should you choose to keep EGF, we'd have to figure out how he learned the ability and all (an I'll have to discuss with the other user how the ability got to Kakuzu and all that).

Side Note-I was initially thinking that Chinomu wasn't going to be a very good character due to the small amount of content on the page, but the quality of the writing confirmed that you are in no way an incompetent writer.