Talk:Karura Yakushi

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I didn't see any grammar/punctuation errors while I read this page; I like it. As for the overall structure of the page, it is on par with what a good page should look like.

Karura's story is very intriguing and unique. Having her life tested by a virus so soon after birth makes me think of how Spartan babies were placed in a hillside for extended periods to see if they'd survive, that is, if they were not accepted by an examiner. It makes her a very captivating character in my eyes. Her personality, the way it is written, gives her depth and makes it easy to understand how she conducts herself as both a ninja and a person in general. However, I would like to see some more description in her abilities, although that is entirely your decision. I believe that she has great potential as a character. Keep up the good work!