Thread:OmegaDragonite/@comment-4097945-20121019070933/@comment-4097945-20121101141831

About the massacre, these were the two bad things about it: 1. Itachi is very powerful. Your young character would be dead in mere minutes against him. 2. Tobi wanted the clan to die. He wouldn't spare Ryoma unless he would later use him or be helpful to his plans.

So, think about what you want your character to be defined by. There are plenty of ways to approach it, so give it time. Also, I say you need to explain better how his brothers and family were killed by him. And you need to say in the page if they were killed before or after the massacre, because it's impossible for them to have survived it.

P.S: You changed the name, and it's nice :), but it's actually Ryūma, for it to mean "The Dragon and the Horse".