Thread:Chix777/@comment-25152698-20140808201122/@comment-1875854-20140808214248

Well, here's the thing. It's not a bad app, but the way she learned it is kinda strange, per se. As in, why would you send a 9 year old to assassinate the war hero Kakashi? Wasn't she fresh out of the Academy?

And, then, there's the thing, that she was nine, and learned the Chidori through weeks of practice and smarts? When Intelligence isn't even a section of her abilities. Not that it has to be, but for a nine year old, to study an A-Rank move, and just learn it with training from someone else isn't likely. Most genin and chuunin can't even do those, and the ones who have (Naruto, Sasuke, for example) didn't do it when they were just 9 years old.

However, I'm not denying it. Just that learning part needs to be changed a bit, because it seems very unlikely, especially that she survived fighting Kakashi at nine, and was able to study the technique and learn it on her own. Did she even have great skill with lightning beforehand? Which, probably might not be the case, as lightning prowesses aren't really common from Kirigakure.

And as for the unique usage, Chidori and LC wouldn't fit an assassin. At their regular execution, they are too loud and noticeable. What you should put there, would be, how would she make it different from previous users. Would she sound proof it? How? That's the things you should put there.