Talk:Hidden Technique: Pan's Wrath

Consistency
Be consistent. First, you call it Hidden Technique, then, in the infobox you name it "Art of Pan's Anger" and "Ninja Art: Pan's Wrath". I'm not referring to the different names, just the fact that you didn't say "Hidden Jutsu" or "Secret Technique". Type identifies chakra nature, and most hidden technique (except Haku's and some other) don't have a nature. So it's not Hidden Jutsu. I can't comment the range, but it's best if you keep it short-range. Making vines that trap the opponent from 10+ meters is far, that's about, if I'm not wrong, that's about 32 feet. Then we have a strange technique, that does not seem to be mixed well together. Vines, ok. But 1.000.000+ leaves, come on. First, in order for those to hit, they are probably sharp as hell, now imagine 1,000,000 miniature blades cutting and cutting you over and over. Then, chakra bombs made out of nature. Does that seem normal? First, raw chakra needs to be tames, then released to cause an explosion, so you should have pointed that out, then we have the problem that only a sage can absorb chakra from nature to use it, and making your character a sage, I would definitely not recommend it. Before you work on the problems you have, I think that is out of question, because you would have a hard time dealing with so much. To fix the character AND add new information constantly, AND explain how he got the Sage Mode AND how he uses it, that would be too much. So, rethink the technique, and, I don't know what Pan is, unless you're referring to a frying pan. There's a trivia section for something.

P.S.: You don't end a sentence and start another with but, use commas. There are exceptions, but this one is not.

 ☆ DC2 ☆  (You in mah territory, biotch!) 07:12, October 10, 2012 (UTC)