Talk:Shadows of the Past: Destiny Unleashed!

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This story is rather promissing. You are a good story teller and especially the first fighting scene was really entertaining. However, so far the plot seems a bit predictable but then again, we are are not far enough in the tale for a huge plot twist. Still, I hope you will do some work with character development since Team Hotaku seems like a total rip-off of the old Team 7. As mentioned earlier, you've caught my attention and I will certainly read the next chapter. Keep it up or better yet, IMPROVE!!

oh yeah before I forget. Please check out my work. I'm not that much of a story teller but i think of myself as a talented story creator. That is why I have only made character articles so far. So please, pay back the critizism i have given you (negative or possitive. Don't hold yourself back) by providing me with some feedback.

My work includes Patorikku Purizumu, Hitomi Uchiha, Takahiro Purizumu and Purizumu Clan

--OOPPHOo 22:13, October 14, 2009 (UTC)