Thread:Sainami/@comment-6003865-20140221045250

What is the name of your Uchiha?

Yorinaga

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Yorinaga

How did your Uchiha awaken the Mangekyō Sharingan? What is the role of the Curse of Hatred going to be for the Uchiha?

Yorinaga left the main continent and traveled west after he broke out of the prison in Ishigakure. He traveled over the mountains and through the jungle on the other side. He met one of his True Companions, an older man who had lost his daughter and son, and by extension his wife, to the wars lead by the ones who screamed the sage's name the loudest, on these travels. Eventually they came to rest in the city of Del Mass. It was an independent trade city in the middle of 4 kingdoms, it lied in the crossroads between them. It was a good city, and Yorinaga started to climb out of the darkness as his faith in the human race was restored by the selfless acts of its citizenry and the love to one another. (His background, once finished, is sort of based around him almost rising out of the darkness, only to be plunged even farther in) Chivalry and general kindness were upheld by an order of chivalrous warrior monks who revered war, as it was the true test of the mettle of men. (think jashinists with a code of honor)

But this all changed when one of the surrounding kingdoms invaded Del Mass in the name of the sage (think crusades, they all think they are the true worshipers of the sage. The sage is their god) to gain an advantage over the neighboring kingdoms. To call it a massacre would be an understatement, in the span of several hours over half the city was dead. The monks had tried to stop the kingdom, but they were outnumbered beyond belief. They could kill scores of enemies a piece and still lose. Yorinaga, whose soul was on the verge of healing, descended once again into the blackest depths of hatred. His Mangekyo Sharingan awakened as he walked into the main square and saw the dead lying strewn all over the street. Fathers who had attempted to shield daughters, mothers holding on to their sons, husbands embracing wives. None were spared, not even the young. His body was once again engulfed in the flames of rage. Even the darkness surrendered to his gaze. As the sun set upon that red day, the very earth was shrouded in flames and darkness. Yorinaga flew into a rage and incinerated battalion after battalion of men, eventually killing half the army before they quit the field. He then proceeded to collapse from the exhaustion. This is how he earned his moniker as the Inferno of Del Mass.

As was said in the original app, the curse of hatred is the main driving force of my character. This extends to the point where several of his abilities, such as his chakra that is tainted with the flames of his rage, stem from the curse.

Which Fanon abilities do you plan to develop with the Mangekyō Sharingan? How is it relevant to the Uchiha philosophy and mythology? (Please see Dōjutsu Technique Application as a guideline!) I plan to have a pair of eyes that are signified by both the light and dark parts of his person. He spent a decade in pitch black conditions, but then was freed and walked back into the light. His abilities will be passive in nature. His right eye's ability will consist of what is essentially an enhanced base sharingan. Its normal clarity of vision and predictive capabilities will be significantly enhanced, though it still can not see the chakra network of a person. However due to the difference in sight, if one tried to look through both eyes at once, one would become dizzy due to the drastically different vision. That being said, this ignores the ability of the other eye.

The other eye is virtually an exact opposite of the first ability. Its passive ability is to absorb all of the light in an area. This eye, while not technically blind, is incapable of seeing normally due to this ability. This move is essentially a non-genjutsu Bringer of Darkness technique, as normal eyes plus other sharingan/rinnegan can not see in it. The byakugan on the other hand can see the chakra network but not anything else. Even using techniques that create light while in this field will not help, as the light will just be absorbed. There are no shadows in the darkness field. There is a nominal time limit of five minutes on the field, after that it exponentially strains the eye using it, which leads to the weakening of the ability.

His eyes will also manifest a third ability between them. Yorinaga's character is essentially strung between Darkness and light, and is made up of flames. Fire has a dark side in the flames of destruction, but it can purify and renew life as well. While technically this is a canon ability, the way it is being obtained has me throw it in this section. The Flames of Amaterasu exemplify this at its utmost, the dark flames are capable of destroying or purifying all of creation. Between the fire of his soul and the light of one eye balanced with the darkness of the other, the strongest of all the flames can be created. Even though they are black, the flames still produce light. That being said, blaze release will not exist with this synthesized Amaraterasu, and its use will be limited to two times a day, as it is a synthesized version vs the natural ability. These eyes are far less powerful than most of the Mangekyo Sharingan abilities, so they are essentially a class behind the normal curve. This means as a two eye ability it would make sense for one of the higher abilities to be able to be created from these weaker ones.

I have not decided on a name for either of the abilities yet.

Each use of the Mangekyō Sharingan should strain the eyes of the Uchiha, unless the Uchiha has find another way to avoid to fall to complete darkness. Overusing the Mangekyō Sharingan leads to immediate blindness. How do you plan to keep this rule in play?

This eye pair presents a unique difficulty in this regard, as one eye is essentially blind already, which makes this pointless, and the other eye makes the eye's sight better, which makes this issue ironic.

My solution was simply to ignore this issue on the right eye, which will almost never see enough use to actually run into this issue, as Yorinaga would only use his sharingan, or the Man-sharingan, when his opponent is so strong he feels he can't win otherwise. That being said, any opponent who is that strong would mean a simple increased sight ability isn't going to help much.

The other eye instead of going blind, as the eye can't see anyway, is going to have the technique based in the eye weaken if it is overused. decreasing the size of the field before eventually not being able to suck enough light to shroud it in complete darkness.

The Amaterasu two eye ability has such a strict usage amount, that one can not easily abuse it. As well as it would likely cause less strain as the use is split between two eyes.

Do you plan on achieving the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan after this approval? No I do not. The man-sharingan is as high as i plan to give yorinaga.

Optional Information: I am fully willing to drop the Amaterasu if you wish, I just was writing this and noticed how perfectly it fit in with everything else.

Thank you for your time its not worthless, it is only worth less (talk) 04:52, February 21, 2014 (UTC) 