Thread:Shen Yi/@comment-26261281-20151125200944/@comment-26193148-20151126011045

I'm good Dragon!!!!! <3 Lmao. Sorry, Been busy on other projects and real life. But I've been hearing good things about you. And I'm happy that you're evolving. Anyway, let me get to the onions.

Well this can be said for both, being an anime series, you should follow the adding the kanji and romanized spelling in the introduction for immersion purposes. And also it just looks that much more badass. Other than that, you have been keeping a good ascension in adding powers and abilities. Nothing too godly nothing too weak. Enough to make your characters believable in an actual Shounen series. BUT

I want you to now focus more on history and personality. Include events and the emotional aftermath. As humans, we often go through shit yes, but also include how it affected the character and their response. How did the character change? How did their view on the world change? Their relationship with others? THere are so many questions that need to be asked. Do that, and I will show you how to umm....Well I guess implement other people in your stories lmao.