Thread:Fuurinjou/@comment-24012990-20131010075423/@comment-14363083-20131010210724

Your idea for the story seems legit and reminiscent of Naruto in the sense that flashbacks help to explain the present. And be careful with Ryotaro Morita's abilities. In the Naruto series, it's impossible to have all five chakra natures by normal means. There is always a catch, like Jiongu or the Rinnegan. Let me know when you've finished editing him so that I can take a look at your finished work. :)

My story is similar to Naruto in a different sense. You know how Kishimoto incorporates hundreds of characters and then leaves them underdeveloped? I kinda hate that. :P My plot revolves around a few given people and there experiences with all of the other characters. Even though at least one main character is always in each chapter, the short stories are about the minor characters, giving them development and clearing up blank information (in my way) that Kishimoto leaves out (like names, places, unexplained Jutsu, Kage, villages, etc.) The overall story however is still focused on the main characters. Their relationships that develop in the shorter arcs are what bring everything together at the large battle before the actual final battle between my main character and the main antagonist.

However, because the nature of my characters, I'm always adding new things or changing information. For example, I just eliminated some previous kage from other villages. My character Keigan is no longer Nidaime Yamakage, but rather Shodai Yamakage. I'm trying to make sure everything is in order before I start with putting everything out there. On top of that, I'm not going to use this site anymore. It's a fanon site yet you have to go through so much crap just for your characters.

Thanks for the read!