Talk:Furīzu

Hunter-nin: Jinsui
Yo, Dou. So basically, I stumbled across your page. Now I don't know why you'd make a page with basically no content at all, not even a picture, but yeah. You only added the infobox and that's it. As well as a short intro. No section, no nothing. I advise you to take a look at the Manual of Style if you don't know the coding or the proper structure of pages. If you need anything I'm ready to help you, just message me at any time. Lastly, I'd like to warn you that you're page would be deleted if you don't add some content soon. Jinsui (My Talkpage ) 12:01, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Quality Committee Advice
From the infobox, I see you're trying to give this guy a lot of kekkei genkai and doujutsu. Now keep in mind this is my personal opinion. You don't have to follow what I say, it's just my thoughts on how to make Furīzu a better character. Firstly, I think you should cut down on the number of Kekkei Genkai, especially Doujutsu. Why? simple. You're really making this character similar to Madara, that's one thing. Another issue is that you're chasing for sheer strength only, which you find in acquiring Doujutsu. Now in order to make a good character, you don't need fancy Doujutsu techniques, all you need is Character Development. This is acquired through simple steps. I could explain them, but it would take too long. I think they're very well-explained in |Sei's blog. You should really take a look at it. And remember, try to be original. You love doujutsu, that's nice. You can make your own Doujutsu instead of simply adding every single Doujutsu in canon to your character. So yeah, I'm looking forwards to seeing how the page turns out. If you need any help, you can message me. Peace. Jinsui (My Talkpage ) 12:01, January 25, 2015 (UTC)