Thread:Shen Yi/@comment-25202104-20150625210657/@comment-26576038-20150626153938

Great job. Tho two things. Well first, i love that you do descriptions on personality and background. That's wonderful. Now the three things. 1) Freezing Release. I don't know why it;s a thing. I Don't the difference between freezing and Ice release. I mean you can keep it But i think it would be better with ice. It'd be like me using Skeleton Release instead of Shikotsumyaku. Ummm The second thing is you shouldn't link it to Doujinn. nothing against him, but every character should be their own. Even if she has a relationship with him. She should be something seperate. Maybe ne reference is enough. But you don't want people to like confuse the two. And finally. A bit more ability description. That's something thats big on NF. A lot of characters have like a million powers and abilities. But like three sentences explaining each. I was taught that the description should match the power.

Everything else is wonderful. And I wanna see Sogani be used beastly.