Talk:Shan Uchiha

Since you came out and asked for the rules, I am actually gonna assist with getting your articles up the standards (Only if you don't mind). Here's a list of things that must be fixed.
 * You need to devise a reason for her survival of the Uchiha Massacre. Your background is incredibly vague and the personality is very, very dry. The focus point of her personality is "saving money" which isn't much of a personality. Try using this to devise a length and plausible personality.


 * I clicked edit on your page, and all I see is ALOT of code. Are you using the Rich Text Editor? If not, try and c/p the infobox off another character page...its a lot simpler.


 * The Appearance is alright. Can't really say much more.


 * On to the abilities
 * You describe her as caring and having pride in her clan, but why would she kill her friend in order to recieve the Mangekyo?
 * I'm also gonna come up and say no Chidori. Only Kakashi and Sasuke know it, and its obvious neither of them will teach it to anyone else.
 * Also, she is only 15. Can utilize everything up to Mangekyo, including its three abilities. With her age and the Mangekyo Sharingan's blinding capabilities, the sheer exertion of her stamina with these would easily blind her. Even Sasuke, was forced to already take up his brothers eyes and he is only 16-17. He had the Mangekyo for at best... a few chapters

I hope you take these in an effort to fix up your article, the article has fallen to a darker place... where even the old Admins don't come here. A lot of the new users don't grasp the idea of canon, which brings down the quality of the wiki. Have a nice day ^^-- Hohenheim Talk to Me ◕ ‿‿ ◕ 14:54, April 29, 2011 (UTC)