Board Thread:Naruto Fanon's Review Board!/@comment-25208144-20150530045156/@comment-26576038-20150531055447

Im going to keep it one hundred Cam. I love Senjou. I love what you're doing, although i am still shaky that youre main is a female. But whateves.

Now. What I dislike are the powers. She has a lot of shit which is like....SHe should be in her hundreds to reach these pinnacles. As Ash stated, she has some stuff where you'd have to be an absolute master to possess it. I noted you said Goddess of Shinobi. If you think about it, Hashirama only achieved that level through pure destiny. that he was the incarnation of Hagoromo's son. The THird was the only god of shinobi and even his specialization revolved around simply Ninjutsu.

Another thing is the language. You don't want to break author. Like don't throw in you's and just personal interaction. Reading a character is reading a list about them. I'm not discussing her with your words. I shouldn't feel you behind these words.

Besides those, I love Senjou. Just tone it down a bit.