Board Thread:Specific Characters Qualification Exam/@comment-8914761-20150104170803/@comment-3030647-20150105122156

Character Article Judgement:
 * Appearance: 3/5. There's a small description of his physical characteristics, but it's mostly overpowered with certain flashback elements and description of his clothing. His clothing was also described rather flimsily, such as "navy blue attire" and the like, you might want to change that.
 * Personality: 8/20. While there is something there...it's barely anything noticeable beyond the quote you've written, any aspects of which don't appear on the personality section at all. You've described his personality when he was younger, you've gone into depths about his childlike nature, but where is his supposed embodiment of peace attributes? His justice beliefs, etc? So, yeah. That's the reason for the low score.
 * History: 18/30. Writing a lot does not exactly equate to writing quality. Don't get me wrong, what you have in Sigma's history section is good, however...it's a bit disorganized and lacking in various areas. You have a strong focus on Sigma's attributes as a mutant but you fail to complete his resolutions on them. You shift from one time period to another without addressing how he resolved certain problems, particularly in regards to his chakra apparently turning everything into wood? So you might want to reevaluate his history section and add clarification to these aspects. I would be specific but that's probably better for private discussion.
 * Abilities: 20/35. This is probably the maximum I can give you given that the section's incomplete. There are a lot of inconsistencies/incomplete aspects here that don't exactly coincide with Sigma's history, which makes it very difficult for me to judge properly until you've fleshed this out enough.
 * Grammar: 8/10. There's a few lapses in grammar that skew understanding. But just fix those up and it should be alright.

Question 2: 35/50. You can preach all about him being 'peace' but that doesn't exactly coincide with his actual standing within the FC at all. Furthermore, he hasn't killed? I believe in his history you said that he became a 15-year old killing machine?

Question 3: 20/50. You...haven't exactly described much. You've stated that those are his last two restricted techniques, fine. You've stated that he's going to have Black Crown as opposition, cool. But, uh, in what way does that make him grow/change throughout the FC? Not exactly explained. Sorry.

Total: 162/250. Given the minimum is 210, you've failed the exam on my account. Dunno about others, though.