Talk:The Yatsumaru clan

Godmodding
Your article has been tagged for godmodding on the basis of this part: "Ever Yatsumaru Clan member is distinguishable for their white hair and slitted, almost cat-like, turqoise eyes. They also all wear black leather trenchcoat or jumpsuit-like uniforms. They do not age beyond 20 and are resistant to most known diseases. Ever Yatsumaru is extremely durable. This has been expressed by a comment from one victim who's punched a Yatsumaru in the jaw as hard as they could. After breaking their fist they noted how it felt like they were "punching lead". From a Yatsumaru's perspective, they can chew flesh and bone as if it were "chocolate-covered Popcorn". This makes them extremely lethal and difficult to kill. Though the main weakness that has proven to be the downfall of many Yatsumaru is pride. Every Yatsumaru, due to their great power and lethality, is narcissistic and overconfident in their skill and will overlook things in a fight that could pose a threat. Another trait passed down from ever Yatsumaru is their quick digestion. In a matter of 6 minutes, they are able to digest an entire person. Thus they are frequently eating. Maikun has even stated that the Yatsumaru Clan is reknowned for being "The Hunger", as they cannot stop eating. This furthers their cannibalistic mindsets, as every non-Yatsumaru is food in their opinions. Finally, the one trait that the Yatsumaru clan takes the most pride in is their Kekkei-Genkai. It is referred to as 'Sargh', which is Yatsumaru for "Battle Might". In this mode, the Yatsumaru's skin is entirely pigmented black along with (sometimes) red eyes. Not only do they become more durable than their original forms but they also gain increases in strength, speed, and perception. Their ears are lengthened greatly to increase hearing for almost 4 miles. This, however, can be turned to a weakness, as their hearing is acute and sensitive to loud noises. With this ability, the user becomes more violent (at rare times even toward other Yatsumarus) and will stop at nothing to eat everyone it wants."

Firstly, they are effectively immortal. Secondly, as is mentioned, "difficult to kill" due to their durability. When you add that to strength gained from kekkei genkai, it becomes godmodding. Pride may be cited as a weakness, but since when has anyone seen a player-character who is a main character make a fatal mistake? Finally, enemies may not have the resources available to make loud noises. Once you have remedied the godmodding, I will remove the tag. Questions? Concerns? Please visit my talk page. 神技包帯-Shingihoutai | Leave-a-message no jutsu! 17:33, April 30, 2010 (UTC)