Thread:Mallory16461646/@comment-4097945-20121014181600

for the future of your pages, the following things should be fixed:
 * its water RELEASE, wind RELEASE. dont forget that work in the infobox.
 * tokubetsu jonin is lower than jonin. tokubetsu jonin are basically chunin with a certain skill that is jonin level.
 * kaori has water release because she has chakra affiliated with that nature, not because she is from kirigakure. kiri ninjas use mostly suiton, but that is not a rule. please, change that in her page.
 * you dont need an "outfit" section in appearance. just appearance.
 * personality comes before appearance.
 * the trivia section should have full sentences. a bulleted list doesn't mean you start a sentence with "had". also, why is there a page called "kaori (mallory)"? its unnecessary. if you dont mind, ill have it deleted. 