User talk:Jet'ika

advice
dude just some friendly advice, change the powers of your new character since the rinnegan is not allowed on this site and you are only allowed to keep two chakra natures since having more makes it overpowering unless its a blood line limit. change it before any of the admins see this cause they are goona flag it fo deletion.....--Shadow Rage 09:08, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Rinngan
Yes, BUT giving a rinnegan user all of Peins jutsu is a bit copying Pein and thats bad, Shinra Tensei and Banshō Ten'in are allowed, but the Paths are not because thats a direct copy of Nagato andd how he used the Rinnegan--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 14:45, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Outer path is still apart of the 6 paths of Pain............ id have to say no on that 1 but the gravity 1s go for it--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 14:52, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Rinnegan
Under the new Adminship, the rules on Rinnegan have been reverted to their original form. Anyone wishing to have a character with Rinnegan must first gain permission from the admins, and to be honest, that permission is not going to happen. it has come to my attention that you have two characters with the Rinnegan. You have two weeks to fix both of these. Thank you! --Thepantheon 15:02, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Seven Swordsmen
yes i can hold the position on the Seven Swordsman of the Hidden Mist for u for a while but do make the article as soon as possible as many other people my take up the spot, please do link me the character's article after ur done with the initial character creation and before submitting, so go ahead and good luck, hoping to see ur swordsmen...........--Shadow Rage 14:40, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

the article is looking good and has good amount of info and structure, but i just have a few minor problems with it, the first is all characters on this site is allowd to have 3 chakra natures at maximum with two being the regular nature and 1 being a kekkei genkai, so i advise u to remove one of the nature release, also i would like it if u removed this line from his introduction, He is the most feared of the seven swordsmen and has the most graceful and fast technique among them all. as this makes the other swordsmen members look bad. and also lower the battle stats of byakuya. if u can fix these minor problems then he will be good enough to join the swordsmen and the standard i was looking for, oh and for the sword abilities they need to be resonable and not overpowering.........--Shadow Rage 14:02, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

just a quick tip i went over the article again properly and found minor spelling mistakes and grammer errors, if u can fix them it will be great, and also could you list his hometown as in kirigakure instead of konohagakure as i require all the swordsmen to be loyal towards the hidden mist village. could you make him a year older as in 23 and bring his stats down by just 1 point, other than that i have no problem with it, and if u check out the swordsmen page i have added him, so i hope u can make these minor changes, thanks..............--Shadow Rage 18:02, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

well i guess u can keep it as it is no need to change his age, and its seems u have worked out some of the grammer mistakes, for now i have no problem with it, but just to let you known several people where not to keen on having an uchiha on the roster of the seven swordsmen but i was able to pursuade them otherwise, its because we have so many uchiha on this site but anyways just make sure u dont go to overboard with this character, as i dont want the others who are going to join the group complaining about how powerful he is or why an uchiha was made as a swordsmen, but i dont have much problem with it as i found it interesting to have a memeber of the uchiha part of the group. so good luck to u and hoping to see more from byakuya, if u need anything else let me know, and do check out the seven swordsmen page to get a better idea and understanding of the current generation of the group.......--Shadow Rage 12:40, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

well im not sure about when the posting for kirigakure begins but i would like it not to start before at least 6 of the seven swordsmen are made that way we can move on with the story, and also no definate story arc has been planned as of yet, since a lot of peopl haven't finished making their own characters, but my suggestion to u is to finish making ur characters as im sure the canon will kick start within the next few days when ppl have free time untill then i guess u have to wait and also if u want to talk to me or any of the other users then please go to this chat and make an account so that ur ideas and thoughts can be heard, i repeat u must make a account b4 u can chat with the people their since they dont like unknown pppl or ppl who are not from the nff site, so here is the link http://narutofanon.chatango.com/ and if u have any other problems here then let me know, i may not have much authority here but i do know what its like to be the new user in this site and i have a good understanding of this site and its rules........

hmmmmmm i dont mind forming a combo move with u and it does sound interseting but im not sure how blood manipulation works with nafurto fanon so although i dont mind but some ppl might take a bit offense to it so i suggest u ask an admin like shing about the blood manipulation to see if its alright within the standards of the naruto fanon rules, other than that i am okay with it, and sure.......--Shadow Rage 13:45, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

once again i need to say that several people have found ur swordsmen characters kaminari ha's abilities to mimic kisame's samehada and as such i need u to revise the whole abilities of the swords once again, although i didn't have much problem with it since all it did was absorb an enemy chakra and also not to that much of an amount but unfourtunatly the others have told me to tell u to remove it, and as such i need u to revise it again, sorry for the trouble but all of use want our characters to be on an equal level and Samehada is a very sensitive issue since its powers are quite powerful, i hope u understand and not think too much of it other than that ur character is very organized and good amount of back ground........--Shadow Rage 15:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

there are currently no existing page for the false tailed beast, just to let u know they are fake tailed beasts and are less stronger than the real ones and also remmeber to sign up ur characters b4 making a post and once i finsh the begining part of the page i'll rp with u so for now dont add much once i finsh it then we can continue the storyline in a fluid manner, so it shouldn't take more than an hour or so.........--Shadow Rage 13:32, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

unfortunatly im kinds bust writing my finishing part of the story then gonna post on ur section dont worry there is plenty of time since ppl are not gonna do anything much about it today and just in case just send me some breif ideas of what u want S to do and if the story does get moving by any chance b4 u come back than i can brefiely post ur ides in ur place and then later u can come back and repost them urself..........--Shadow Rage 13:56, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

okay i guess i get ur idea and lets see how the story goes on as i m making the finishing touches and will write on the new section that u posted, and about the medical nin i guess u could make him if u want to so let me see what u come up with........--Shadow Rage 14:09, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

jetika i finished my post for todayand also my part of the story for now so ur character S can fight against the Sanbi and do what u like i will add in details later after seeing ur post, and also i left a section for u to write so u can start from there, and also dont go through too much of the plot just write untill u have delt with the sanbi then i have an idea for character interaction, after that we will go with ur idea of a for man team i m still thinking out the basis so for now let see what u write, and also i may not be able to reply u quickly since i have internet problems, so leave me a message on my talk page and i will get back to u as soon as i can, so for now the story is in your and YaijunRinnegan hands, enjoy..........--Shadow Rage 15:10, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

the first thing im gonna say is no dont use my gravity release, as this is to be used by me if i ever can, the reason why becuase i got a lot of complains just for creating the article and writing up stuff u shud look at the talk page of the article, u will see what i mean, also i strongly advise against it since gravity manipulation is considered overpowered or even godmod since several ppl tried to use gravity manipulation as a jutsu or release but got a lot of complain due to the fact that pain also used gravity manipulation and he is considered a overpowered character, u seem to have a need to create kekkei genkai which several ppl are not liking it so as a fellow experienced user i have to strongly advice u to not use gravity release and not use the gravity release name, i suggest u use something as a kekkei genkai for ur clan or just make them a normal specialised in other area of jutsu, i know its annoying but we all have to follow the rules since a lot of crap and stupid articles have been made by previous users so i hope u take this into consideration...........--Shadow Rage 15:30, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Jet ur not allowed to use the Senjutsu: Rasenrengan since it is banned and considered op, so im gonna ask u to change the attack that u used in the story to something else ur only allowed one rasengan elemental variat no more no less only one rasengan no variation no nothing espacially sage enhanced rasengan okay just to remind u b4 shing or any other admin does sumthing about it...........--Shadow Rage 16:12, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

nope no twin rasengan or any other variants ur only allowed one elemental rasengan like if u want a water rasengan then it shud be no problem, but if u creat a twin rasengan or even an odama rasengan then its a problem, just wanted to give u a heads up, u shud really reads all the rules of this site b4 adding stuff to u chars or even in the story, so i hope this doesn't happen next time, so is ur part of the story finished for now or are u gonna write anything else?.........--Shadow Rage 16:34, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

yeah that shud be alright, i'll make the post tonight or by tommorow........--Shadow Rage 16:52, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

jinchuriki status & rinnegan
Rinnegan is a No, since its been deemed too powerful, and even i got yelled at for having a character with it. and as for another uchiha as the jinchuriki of the Hachibi is cliche so i have to say no...sorry but no, and ur uchiha is kinda not allowed wot have more than 3 natures even with a kekkei please remove 1 of them and blaze release is not a necessary given for all uchiha even if it was invented by sasuke, its not a standard for all of them, please revise.--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 14:17, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * In actuality the spot for the hachibi might have been opened prematurely by an admin being hasty and not allowing the previous user anytime to even return to NF, im not sure if its truely open of not, but ill keep you posted on its availibility ok?--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 14:25, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * The canon Naruto - Eigoukaiki is open for the whole site, and about the MS dont add it, its not important to have, and quite frankly its over used on this site, and the RP thing is being removed from the rules because noone follows it.......in my oppinion the mangekyou sharingan is a waste considering you cant use it but so many times--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 14:35, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * Just dont add it, please, using the mangekyou is overused and that story is still cliche. --不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 14:42, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Ice Release
Ice Release is a kekkei genkai for Haku's clan only....sorry its not for an uchiha, if u have hyouton then its like the snow ninja and requires preexisting ice--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 14:44, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blaze Release
Blaze is not a combination, its the manipulation of amaterasu's flames and thus meaning that its a mangekyou jutsu.....please remove--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 14:39, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Eight Tails
I want to err on the side of caution- an Uchiha is already relatively powerful, and combining it with jinchuuriki status leaves it open to abuse. However, if you want to create a non-Uchiha to be the eight-tails' host, I'm open to that! 神技包帯-Shingihoutai | Leave-a-message no jutsu! 16:26, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * About the Hachibi and Kyuubi's current host, those users were head admins at the time, and due to them ignoring any complaints kept their beast, plus all their powers.....this is gonna be rectified in the near future and as for the kyuubi, its gonna be under the jurisdiction of the administration due to its power, and after Him we dont want a repeat......im sorry if this inconvenienced you in any way, but in all honesty having a tailed beast isnt all that great, as i the former owner of the Sanbi turtle have given it up as apart of a canon plot twist...so dont push too hard for a beast its not that great.--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 16:01, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but people went behind my back to change things, and the first I found was today. After expressly clearing slots after consulting the head admin, everything was okayed. Until today I come back to my computer and find that the Eight Tails Host has been put back. It was cleared because a) the RPer quit and b) he wasn't coming back. Unfortunately, the host of the Nine Tails has pretty much left, but due to reluctance to lose anything that makes his character OP we cannot shift that particular shadow over NF. Unfortunately, certain admins lack the necessary communicative skills or foresight to discuss important matters such as this with others, and in addition to inability to take constructive criticism or suggestions, I can do nothing. I can only apologise for my lack of ability to do nothing and the lacking motivation that others need to move on from this. I will clear the Eight-Tails again, and if you can make a character or come up with something, I will be willing to allot it to you. If it is changed back again without my permission, then your complaints need to be addressed to User:Takeshi57 and User:Shiratori Cullen 神技包帯-Shingihoutai | Leave-a-message no jutsu! 16:50, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Uchiha
Hello! It has come to my attention that you are using the exact same pic for two characters. While this is not a major issue, I nevertheless ask you to change it, for the obvious reason that we want original pictures for characters. The two are Byakuya Uchiha and Kenshin Uchiha. Thanks! --Thepantheon 17:32, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Uchiha's Kekkei Genkai
Byakuya Uchiha is an Uchiha, meaning his only kekkei genkai is the Sharingan, nothing more please remove blood manipulation as giving an Uchiha which already super powerful more than 1 kekkei genkai is overpowered, idk why you keep giving uchiha more than 1 kekkei, but this has to stop because its grounds for godmoding in a sense--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 14:35, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Bloodlines, Eight Tails
It has come to my notice that the thing above was the second time you attempted to mix bloodlines, in particular the powerful one of the Uchiha. If you attempt to mix bloodlines again, especially ones that are extinct, there may be punishment involved for defying admins. Also, because of your penchant for mixing bloodline, it has been decided that you cannot be trusted with a bijuu, so you cannot have the eight tails. 神技包帯-Shingihoutai | Leave-a-message no jutsu! 16:53, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Rules
It was the combination with the Uchiha that was the problem, bearing in mind how powerful the Sharingan is anyway- also, the ice bloodline is extinct. You may want to read Naruto Fanon Policy: Rules and Regulations to avoid problems in future. 神技包帯-Shingihoutai | Leave-a-message no jutsu! 12:46, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

In terms of manipulation, I'd say it was being able to control something or otherwise using it in a way that is unnatural normally. All blood can do is flow, with it being a liquid, and coagulate. It would otherwise be impossible to create a "wall" or "shield" of blood, and even clotted blood is nowhere near solid enough to make a shield- thus I would class it as Manipulation and consequently a bloodline. As far as I recall, there are already some Blood Release techniques that exist, and you may want to look at them for an idea of what it would entail. 神技包帯-Shingihoutai | Leave-a-message no jutsu! 13:02, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Twelve Guardians
Well, here are my complications with your character. After they are fixed, she can be a Guardian Ninja:


 * Your character can be a genius, but please lower her IQ. Even someone with an IQ of 120 is extremely rare.  I doubt that a Hidden Village would have two people with over 200 IQ's.


 * If she specializes in Genjutsu, make a section for it.


 * Unless they're like Rock Lee, then every ninja has great chakra control. Please take that out.

Fix this, I'll be happy to make you a Guardian.

Side Note: I'm the current leader of Amegakure. And we're starting Amegakure's part by gathering intelligence so we can strike t the other Hidden Villages. If you want to know more or add to it, please contact me and to post, go to Bloody Rain Falls in Amegakure. Koukishi (話す - "Speak to Me" 12:28, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. Shikaku (Shikamaru's father) didn't have his sons IQ. Anyways, yes Koutetsu is the current leader. And they will post there, then travel to the other villages. Then they'll come back just before the end and we'll get info from other villages. And, I'm fine with you making Konan's grandson. The Admins on the other hand may not. Ask them first. Koukishi (話す - "Speak to Me" 12:45, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, he never beat Shikamaru at Shogi, nor did Asuma. Well, Koutetsu is hard to trust, so he may turn on his second in command and juts kill him. So, he can be if you don't mind if he's expendable. Koukishi (話す - "Speak to Me" 13:00, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, your character can be a Guardian Ninja. I'll add them to the page. Koukishi (話す - "Speak to Me" 11:19, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re, Kekeki
It makes no sense to have eyes that heal.....if your gonna make this technique (which a rip from avatar) then make a water chakra using Medical ninja--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 17:40, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

It sounds too much like my Shokugan, so no sorry--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 22:50, June 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Um at this time i am nolonger an admin of NF as when the situation with User:Saimaroimaru was resolved i lost my powers as he tampered with them, so you will have to ask another admin. sorry for the inconvenience--不滅王 くらやみ - "Immortal King of Darkness" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 06:37, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

ideas
okay he seems to be alright and can be affiliated with otogakure, as for the otogakure plans i will write it after im done with the current Konoha attack arc, and no im not going to post anything at the moment as i want the others to do some posting but i will continue the story from my end, ur character S is currently with my char but if u feel the need to seperate from my hcaracter shinji and take on another of the beast by ur self then ur most welcome to do so and if u want S to stick with shinji then thats is also fine but for now im waiting to see what others are going to do or write and what plotline ideas they r going to contribute, the best thing i suggest u to do is make and finshed all ur characters as some of ur chars are still unfinished despite being part of the story, and then think of writing for the canon. Im also thinking of using Shirou uchiha to attack kirigakure and also use another set of fake bijuu to attack the village or it could go in a another direction, not sure about the details, and also for now dont post on the otogakure page as i need to sort out the story details, so thats the answers to ur question, i hope they help but i woulld kindly suggest u finish ur chars b4 thinking of posting anywhere else..--Shadow Rage 17:24, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Kekkei
No, it is too powerful and does too many things. Have you considered instead using an already-existing kekkei genkai? Shingihoutai | Talk Page 16:23, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

If your character is already a sage, they are most likely powerful enough to get by without a kekkei genkai. Ice is generally frowned upon as its status is unknown, but it is presumed extinct after Haku's death. If you really want a kekkei, I'd recommend making another character, as long as you can keep up with making several and make sure to fill in all the details. Shingihoutai | Talk Page 16:37, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, three natures is okay, but not all ninja have to be ridiculously powerful, so they don't all have to have high levels of chakra. Shingihoutai | Talk Page 16:52, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I am not sure why you seem to be so focused on power- are they from Konoha? Otherwise it would not make sense to compare them to the Senju. Also, what do you mean precisely by "unique" jutsu? Shingihoutai | Talk Page 17:11, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sounds good! Power is alright in moderation, it's just that an RP is about story and how you tell it as much as fighting and power. Shingihoutai | Talk Page 17:31, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Konoha ARC
Jet im posting on the Leaf attack arc again and so i was just asking if ur goona post to since last time in the story ur char S was with My char Shinji, i was thinking that we take on the fake 5 and 6 tails, so im not sure what ur gonna do with S in the arc so if u want S to Stick with Shinji then both of them deal with the two fake bijuu let me know since im gonna post Shinji's part now but not before seeing ur answer because i need to know if S is gonna go his own way and deal with a fake Bijuu alone or Stay with Shinji so let me know asap......--Shadow Rage 09:01, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ice Release
After some admin discussion, it has been allowed on two conditions: 1) You get permission from an admin, 2) You tell the admin how exactly your character got Ice Release. I will need to see a backstory explaining point 2 before anything goes forward. Shingihoutai | Talk Page 10:14, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

No. Your character is already a sage, so powerful enough. Shingihoutai | Talk Page 14:44, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

In which case, I would suggest you alert other admins to review those characters if you do not trust my judgement. And the answer remains no- you have Shadow Clones to bypass the Sage Mode energy restriction, just like Uzumaki Naruto. Shingihoutai | Talk Page 17:44, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, fair enough, I can understand. Have you read the Naruto Fanon Policy: Rules and Regulations? Also, the Guide to Godmodding? Just to help you along? Basically, because this is an RP site and we all participate, it's not like Naruto the manga. In the manga, the only person writing it and participating is Kishimoto. If he makes one character stupidly powerful, it's okay because he's the only one working on it and he's in control. In an RP site, everyone participates together, and to have fun, we all have to compromise and not overpower (OP) our characters. If we OP our characters, we spoil everyone else's fun and have fun at the expense of others. Having too many things at once, such as multiple kekkei or combining two powerful things such as a tailed beast/bloodline or sage/bloodline is overpowering your character. I hope this makes sense. It's not that you got off on the wrong foot as such, it's just you keep making requests for bloodlines or trying to give your character OP combinations of things, which is why some of the admins may be reluctant to give you things. Shingihoutai | Talk Page 10:00, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

In which case, I can only apologise for any misunderstandings or anything the admin may have said in too much of a heavy-handed way from the start. It is often confusing for people to understand what RP is- it's not like writing a manga by yourself, it's like a multiplayer computer game, where using "cheats" (in this case OP your character) is unfair on others. You may have Ice Release for a character if it only has that as an advanced nature or kekkei, and while I will be checking it ever so often just to see that it's going okay, please do tell me if you think I'm getting heavy handed with you. As for changing your sage animal, your idea is very original and I would be more than happy for your Sage to be a monkey sage or associated with the Monkey King. If you ever have any questions about RPing, please feel free to leave a message on my talk page :) Happy character tweaking! Shingihoutai | Talk Page 12:07, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Give it a shot
I'll give anything a shot twice. So, if you want, we can chat / talk / discuss this later, I am going to bed right now. I will see you tomorrow to talk about Karasu and collaberating together for an RP maybe.

Bombadcrow666 06:43, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Jet
jet i will start posting again as soon as i can so the story im going for is basically shinji and s are still running around looking for the tail beasts and so they reach the training field and its there they are confronted by the fake 5 and 6 tails, and both shinji and s fight each fake tail beast, and also ur monkey sage idea is good just to let u know my character shinji has the summon called the monkey king goku who is ruler of the monkey's and king of the land of apes just to give u heads up since ur doing ur monkey sage thing and thats is fine, if u could change the name for the king of monkey's from ennma to goku since its been a long time since he was alive according to the fanon canon which takes place 80 years after shippuden just to let u know, and also if u wanna post the comedy stuff before the action begins then go ahead and let me know...........--Shadow Rage 08:29, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

excellent idea jet couldn't think of a batter idea myself, sorry if was was sounding demanding or anything anways thanks for listing to my request, and good luck.........--Shadow Rage 07:47, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

jet started the post about Shinji and S, i posted Shinji's side of the story so if u can have a read through and post S's part of the story when u get the time it will be great, no worries..........--Shadow Rage 08:48, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Enma and Kawayama
You can keep the name, actually. Kyuubi, a supernatural beast, has been in existence since the Sage of Six Paths split the Ten Tails, and I'm pretty sure the elder toads are really old too. Anyway, nice idea, I like the sap bit. You don't have to have elder monkeys- you could make your own system! You could have king and queen, you could have a lord, etc. But everything is looking good so far! Shingihoutai | Talk Page 09:22, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Iwagakure
Uh, Jet'ika. I was given permission to change the name. Just go to Rocky Relationships in Iwagakure and post. Also, please tell the people at your previous arc that you have left. TO better communicate, please come by the NF Chat, http://narutofanon.chatango.com "Ruler of the Dangai Precipice World" (話す - "Speak to Me" 12:58, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Okee doke. :D Well, I'd like it to end like that, but with them privately saying it was a great battle and such. Also, please accept my off to join everyone at NF Chat (The link is above). "Ruler of the Dangai Precipice World" (話す - "Speak to Me" 12:59, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Puppeteers Guild
Yup, I hope they'll be a part of Eigoukaiki, and you're welcome to make your own puppeteer. The only condition is that they are a Suna nin! :) Shingihoutai | Talk Page 09:51, June 23, 2010 (UTC)