Thread:Nakuka/@comment-35271227-20190408023419/@comment-35271227-20190412024152

A suggestion:

Kusari's personality section seems rather generic. Just saying this since you mentioned how she is towards potential "alpha males" when she's only had two in her life...

Maybe just summarize how she felt towards Raizo, then how she feels now about Keshin? Compare and contrast the two; one was just instinctual admiration, the other started as that, but ended up as love.