Thread:Uzumaki Ashura 4/@comment-1399043-20191021174139

Yama Ōtsutsuki and Kin Mode need to be fixed. Piling on random crap without a purpose or need and a piss poor explination for how they acquired them is highly frowned upon here.


 * Do you really need to have them be a Jinchuriki of Kurama?
 * Do they really need Tenseigan and Sage Mode? (Pick 1)
 * Do they really need the Eight Gates? (Quick answer, NO!)
 * WTF is "Chaos Release"? What elements comprise it? (ALL Advanced Nature Transformations are combinations, no Exceptions and Blaze Release doesn't count)
 * This: "When Taiyō activated his Tenseigan he was at the waterfall of truth and spend most of his time when he camped out he gain sage mode, the first 7 gates Kurama link(KL1), the Rasengan and eventually the Dark Tenseigan, and Chaos Release." is just bad.

You have 3 days to fix your article or it will be deleted. 