Thread:Geti186/@comment-24433794-20130306125037

Hey man! Welcome to the Naruto Fanon! Now, I do have one thing to say. I notice that you're a Dragonball Fanon guy, and I can see that on your articles, as you list your abilities instead of writing them in paragraphs. Well, you can simply put the abilities into pargraphs. For example:

Preta is a user of the Jashin Cults unique brand of jutsu, which is referred to as Jujutsu; it allows him to curse another person through either blood contract or by ritualistic means. When a Jujutsu is placed on one or more persons, a place, or an object, it is usually followed by some form of adversity or misfortune. As a result of various experiments and rituals performed by Preta throughout the years, he has gain considerable amount of knowledge and understanding in the use of curse techniques, and has found a variety of ways to use them in and outside of battle. Even without praying to the Jashin god, Preta is still able to effectively use curse techniques by calling out the spirits of the dead to help him invoke the curses. One of his most frequently used Jujutsu is the Curse Technique: Pain of Infinite Torment, a technique through which he subjugates his opponents to a great amount of pain rather them outright killing them. This technique requires him to form a spiritual link between himself and the opponent by either drawing out or consuming the opponent’s blood.

See, this user simply connects all of the abilities together, and puts them into a single paragraph. Now, secondly, I wanted to speak to you about the beginning of the article. I do enjoy the rhetorical questions, but I'm not exactly sure if that follows the manual of style. I would just be careful on things like that, lol. But, enjoy your time here on the Naruto Fanon!  