User talk:Belus Levia

Regarding your character
I think that your character has some potential, especially the limitations you put on him. Unfortunately, from my own experiences I've noticed that implanting a character near the real storyline helps start you off, but will makes it difficult to write. I would suggest keeping the base of your character (adopted by an Uchiha that later died, blindness, and personality), but remove the connection to the Madara and the massacre. Most of the stories people have been writing lately take place after the supposed conclusion of Naruto so that they can design their own plot without the limitations of the canon universe. You may want to think about doing this as well. Furthermore, if you need any aid feel free to trouble me...I have no problem helping out.

P.S. I thank you for your comments regarding my work.