Thread:Ash9876/@comment-8914761-20131015061520/@comment-3030647-20131015112312

Alright...this is a bit difficult because, I seriously think Sigma needs a lot of work before something very positive can be said about him. While the overall concept is...interesting, you can expand on several things. 1) You should probably describe his ancestry and how his forefathers survived the massacre and moved to Yamagakure. 2) I dunno if the Scorch Release thing is still there...but it's probably best to remove it. Dual Kekkei Genkai isn't really needed when you have Blaze Release and all the Dojutsu possible for an Uchiha clansman. 3) Definitely fix up some formatting issues overall with his appearance section, it looks a bit clunky. 4) Expand on his personality is a must. It's barely three sentences, and doesn't describe much. Go back to any RPs and things and flesh out what his personality is like and why. 5) Expand on his general ability section; you've described him as a genius, but what makes him a genius? How has he striven to improve that? In what way does he fight in combat? Does he have a specific niche? Because of this, what weaknesses does he hold? Etc.

Overall, until you complete these things, it's rather difficult for me to give an overall review on how Sigma is. As of now...if put to a scale, he regrettably isn't that high.