Board Thread:Fanon Canon 2/@comment-24588326-20140921204208/@comment-3030647-20141002000211

Ita, I'd like to tell you a few things that are wrong with your app before you have the chance to redo it, given that all three Kirigakure applications had some flaws:
 * Agriculture: How does Kiri manage to have a successful economy based on its agriculture? Kirigakure is a land surrounded by a lot of water and rain. Both of these things make the soil extremely damp and almost impossible to actually farm in unless the majority of your funds were dedicated to allowing it to grow. And even then, it'd be almost impossible.
 * Newspaper: Given that your newspaper caused extensive trouble for the Kage, how had it not been shut down by the higher-ups of the village? While Junsui might have been pulling the strings, in the end, he wouldn't have had enough political sway to be able to continue a newspaper that directly targeted Mei's capabilities as a Kage without the newspaper suffering repercussions.

That's all from me about why you're being given the opportunity to redo your app.