Talk:Sannoto X

Short Review
Hey, sorry I took so long. I'll be brief, since I hate doing dragged out reviews. Basically, what you should work on is trying to focus on a common trait of Sannotou's, instead of making his abilities all over the place. I mean, in addition to his mastery of hand-to-hand, you have medical ninjutsu and sealing jutsu. And also, he has a Kekkai Tota and Senjutsu? I'm sorry, but in my opinion, those abilities are just all over the place, and people may come to see this as too much. Overall, I think you did a good job with the article. Grammar is alright, you formatted the page well, everything is fine, and he's a unique character. But as I said, you should aim to focus his abilities so they don't appear as though he's all over the place. Those characters never end up well. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 03:14, April 7, 2012 (UTC)