Thread:Nisshou/@comment-25748610-20141125225633/@comment-3030647-20141126003451

Firstly, Journal. It is completely unnecessary to create a subdivision of a clan when there's only three members, as you've put it. Would it not just be easier to state that they are a part of both clans? Unless the clans merged after a long period of time, at which point I'm doubtful that they would keep the same name at all, there's very little point in the creation of a "Uzumaki-Hyuuga" derivative.

Secondly, your Shinjikyugan. Beyond the enhancement of the Byakugan's vision as well as being able to detect individual chakra signatures easily, which I assume could be replicated with the standard Byakugan after an extended period of time, especially with the powerful chakra reserves of the Uzumaki Clan, what is the difference between the Shinjikyugan and Byakugan? And what reason does it need to be an "evolution"? Sure, you want to differentiate the main cast from others, but wouldn't it be more effective to do so in a subtle manner that doesn't go against what canon has stated? Note, I don't mind you creating assumptions about the possession of these Kekkei Genkai. However, when you think about it, beyond an enhancement to the Byakugan's vision based on the Uzumaki's exceptional life force, what else could their chakra provide?

All I am saying is that both pages aren't actually necessary and you're simply attempting to create something "unique" without thinking about the fact that it's only a simple extension of canon things. The Uzumaki-Hyuga page has nothing more than a simple listing of abilities that the Hyuga clan have, and the Shinjikyugan has nothing more than enhanced vision and chakra detection in comparison to the normal Byakugan.