Thread:Sainami/@comment-6383890-20140403084122/@comment-5963425-20140421100443

The application is not sufficient enough to get approved for the following reasons:
 * Your character is the brother of Tajima, who is quite an important supporting character in Naruto. I’d suggest talking with Ben about it if it doesn’t require an approval of him.
 * Fact: Madara Uchiha and Izuna Uchiha were the “first” Uchiha to awaken the Mangekyou Sharingan. Considering that these are both important figures in Naruto, your character awakening it before them and simply keeping it a secret (remember that Uchiha in that time were even more power hungry) would be going against Canon.
 * In regards to your awakening of the third tomoe, please ensure that you describe the period of time between his awakening of the third tomoe due to witnessing the assassination and the following realization of Tajima's death and impact upon him to awaken the Mangekyou.
 * The Curse of Hatred could greatly be expanded on by using the character’s motives, personality, abilities and background. Even then, the effect on the Uchiha could be entirely different than just ‘slaughtering Senju just because of my hatred for them’. I’m not saying you cannot use it but it is less original.
 * Going with Hiruzen’s age that should be around 70, and with Tsunade being around 50, the First Hokage should have been dead for around 30-40 years. Adding the age of Tajima, I’d say that your character in the current timeline will be around 150 to 180 years old. How does that work? Is he in this timeline or not? And then, what was his purpose of existence?