Board Thread:Naruto Fanon's Review Board!/@comment-5892594-20150529035330/@comment-4869113-20150531041042

In my opinion, I think that while it is explained why he has those abilities, and in some cases they do blend, there isn't enough detail and explanation that goes into explaining those. Personally, I feel as though that each technique, especially his area draining seal, isn't explained well enough; they're confusing, simply put. It's this confusion that often makes him seem much more powerful than what he is, to other users, and while he is powerful, he is definitely no god and has several weaknesses.

The actual techniques and such are very creative, but because of this creativity and a general lack of detail, they aren't easily comprehended, especially with your rather unique interpretation on all things naruto. Thus, while I have no actual issue with your character and his content, I would heavily suggest taking the time to properly writing out whom he is. This doesn't mean writing 100 pages worth of stuff, but it should be enough writing to properly illustrate who the character is, and what he can do. Anyway, the ideas and foundation are there, but it need some work.