Thread:Ω kaiser Σ/@comment-26369387-20190309194300

Ah, yes, sorry about that.

While I don't really get what is exactly problem with commenting straight into article, I promise I'll try to message you directly from now on.

To start this off, here are my previous comments from the articles:


 * Screams of All Storms Technique
 * For "Screams of All Storms Technique", 万嵐絶叫の術(Banran Zekkyō no Jutsu) would be more appropriate Japanese name.


 * Serenity of All Flames Technique
 * For 万火平静の術, "Banka Heisei no Jutsu" would be more appropriate reading.


 * Enslavement of All Stone Technique
 * While 万石使役の術 is fine, more appropriate reading of it would be "Banseki Shieki no Jutsu".


 * Sekenkū
 * As far as I know, 蟲 can be read as "mushi; ki; chū" but not as "kū", meaning proper reading of 世間蟲(which literal English name would be "World Insect") would be "Sekenchū". Same thing with 雷蟲; that would be "Raichū".


 * That said, I just came up with a name that would fit better within Naruto-universe: 秘術・集蟲界, Hijutsu: Shūchūkai(Secret Technique: Congregated Insect World), where 集蟲 is pun with 集中, shūchū(concentration; convergence; centralization; integration; gathering together).


 * Bloodline Weave
 * In Naruto, the name of "Bloodline Weaving" in Japanese would most likely be written as 血継製織, Kekkei Seishoku.


 * Musubi Clan
 * In Naruto(as well as in real life Japan), the family names are written with either all hiragana or all kanji, not with kanji+hiragana combination, which is used with basic words. In other words, it would be more fitting within Naruto-universe that Musubi is written with either hiragana(Musubi Clan (むすび一族, Musubi Ichizoku)) or with kanji(Musubi Clan (結一族, Musubi Ichizoku)).


 * Scratching Sand - Advent of a Decaying World
 * The Japanese name you are using for this technique wouldn't exactly fit within Naruto-universe. Allow me to suggest name that would be more fitting: 掻砂　腐界降臨, Sōsa — Fukai Kōrin(Scratching Sand — Advent of a Decaying World)

Just trying to help. (^_^) 