Board Thread:Fanon Canon 2/@comment-25152698-20140921025012/@comment-4869113-20140921155138

Before getting to why it was denied, the part about surviving from the womb is very very very creative. She survived the massacre because she wasn't alive yet, seemingly, Very creative. I applaud that, however the rest of the app is below average.

Firstly, it seems rather convenient that she was due to have Sayuri the night of the massacre. The odds of that happening is next to none. As an author, we try to make the stories plausible and by doing that, it seems you are just making it easy for the character to survive without nurture. Secondly, while I do not mind the usage of Sannoto, you did use him incorrectly. If Yami had committed a taboo by getting impregnated by a Senju, then why would he even have the ability to go into the Uchiha compound? In addition, how would Yami survive if she comitted such a big taboo. Wouldn't her own clan have murdered her?

So, those are a few things. Either way, it's a decent first draft.