Talk:Kitori Otsutsuki/@comment-35309015-20180416235450/@comment-26369387-20180417110714

Hello there. I would have two(constructive criticisms, that is): Just trying to help. (^_^)
 * Ōtsutsuki(notice the long o) is written with kanji 大筒木, not with katakana as you put it(which is also quite wrong, since オヒーウヒーウキ reads as "Ohīuhīuki", which is not how Ōtsutsuki is pronounced.
 * In Naruto, the names are written in Japanese order, family name-given name, meaning that in Naruto, your character's name would be written as 大筒木キトリ, Ōtsutsuki Kitori.