Thread:DazzlingEmerald/@comment-8914761-20140808154038

Myself and the others admire you strive at making your own techniques, for your Rinnegan user Sayuri. But other users have pointed out to me (Via I never checked), that a few of them are just outrageous. And I'll list them below.

Rainbow Star Burst: From what's been pointed out, it's just a Narutoversion Stardust Breaker, from Dragon Ball Z's super Gogeta. Even from the picture. If you're gonna so it like so, at least give credit. Like; "This technique were to represent is blah were brought into the Naruto world."

Zenshin: This technique is just Kamui all over again. Even much so, it's much like Raido's Siddha. Well his old technique that he no longer uses, because it was just like Kamui. Change it. Someone else pointed out there is a bit of c/p from the Kamui page that I never bothered to check so I'm insure if that's true.

Devil's Advocate: We just want to know, how is there something that uses chakra, that can negate chakra absorption. And even then, the mechanics need to be explain better. Like how, and why? Weakness? Even then, she shouldn't be able to use techniques, because she is surrounded by a barrier. And she'd just be hurt by her own techniques.

I believe there is more, but I just wanted to at least start this before I forgot. 