Talk:Keiku Uchiha/Dreamscape

I have some valid questions about this character, and one complaint of plagiarism.

Plagiarism Complaint
I'll start off with the complaint. Two your Susanoo weapons are direct copies of Lancer's weapons from Fate/Zero. Gae Dearg and Gae Buidhe have the following effects in Fate/Zero.

His Noble Phantasms are his twin spears, Gae Buidhe, a spear that makes any wounds caused by it unhealable, and Gae Dearg, a spear that pierces through mana.

Now let's look at your two moves, which have Gae Dearg and Gae Buidhe written write above them.

Gae Dearg

Hama no Benibara (破魔の紅薔薇, Crimson Rose of Exorcism) is a spiritual weapon that takes the form of a spear. It can destroy anything created from or composed of chakra by simply touching it, by severing the physical energy and spiritual energy that all chakra is composed of.

Gae Buidhe

Hitsumetsu no Kibara (必滅の黄薔薇, Yellow Rose of Mortality) is a spear-like spiritual weapon that takes the form of a spear. It is cursed and can inflict wounds that cannot be healed or regenerated from by any means.

So the two weapons destroy chakra, aka pierce mana, and make wounds that are unhealable. considering the name is applied to both of those things, and the fact that they have the same effect, I have no choice but to conclude that they are plagiarism, and ask you to change them.

In addition to those two, your weapon Fragarach has the exact same effect as the Fragarach from F/HA.

'''In the visual novel Fate/hollow ataraxia, the sword appears as the weapon of Bazett Fraga McRemitz. It is a weapon that, upon the activation of an opponent's strongest attack, reverses time and kills the enemy before they use their attack.'''

Your version states,

It is considered the ultimate form of counterattack. It works by warping causality to always strike the opponent in the heart with its blade right before they unleash their attack. Despite being released afterward and no matter how fast the opposing attack is cast, Kiri Eguru Senjin no Ken always strikes first by changing the flow of time to rewrite events so that it makes it own strike against the enemy before the opposing move was ever made, gouging out their heart and destroying their body from within.

Note the causality concept utilized for Fragarach only exists within the Type-Moon universe, and is not established in any other version of Fragarach. The unimproved version also utilizes the causality reversal to pierce the heart before the weapon is used, which is a key component of Lancer's Noble Phantasm from Fate/Stay Night.

Considering the extent to which these abilities all relate to a single source's abilities, I have no choice but to consider them copied from the Type-Moon Universe. I would ask you remove or change these sections of this article.

Dreamscape
This is on a less formal note, and is not related to my role as a Hunter-nin, but to my role as the Head Operator (HO) of the Dreamscape Project.

Two things here really.

One, you aren't going to become the secret ten tails jinchuriki, the only way to become the jin of the ten tails is to obtain the bodies of five beasts, and the chakra of the other four. You aren't taking Madara's legs. Not to mention that to have your Susanoo up during the IT would mean that you were near the battle, to notice what was going on, which would put you well in sensory range, meaning they'd probably notice the giant ass chakra construct near the battle. Which since uchiha would be known as extinct, likely would break canon. Top that off that Kakashi and Sakura were RIGHT next to it, the odds of you taking it without being noticed are unlikely. To finish off, Hagoromo manifested himself out of Madara's legs, which likely means he consumed all the chakra held within, leaving nothing to consume of the Ten Tails anyways.

Two, this is more a question, How does Keiku keep all of his N-gan powers without the eye in dreamscape?