Talk:The End Is the Beginning Is the End

Review
Well, that was certaintly interesting. Aside from some grammitical errors, its done well. Short, but to the point. There could have been a...smoother transition from the Hokage seeing the cloaked figure and the destruction, a little more imagery really, but aside from that, its pretty solid. Its got potential, depending on how you go with it. Overall, very impressive. --- Illuminate Void 04:12, October 31, 2010 (UTC)