Talk:The Reign of the Snake Prince

Pretty Good!
Wow, that was really good! I must say, I like this story better. The fights were more believeable, and SHOCKER!: There's a female character!

(ahem) Sorry. I've just taken notice that we have very few female OCs on the Naruto Fanon Wiki. And I happen to be a feminist... (cough)

Anyway, the fights were pretty exciting, and much more believeable. I can actually see this being possible in canon!

There were also far less grammar errors. Good job!

In summary: It was a very good story, with exciting fights. And I appreciating exciting fights more than anyone, since the action I write in Kaikinisshoku is boring and bland... T_T

Hope to read more like it! ^_^

--Cyberweasel89 00:07, 7 November 2008 (UTC)