Thread:Davidchola2/@comment-1875854-20120924170355/@comment-4097945-20121004065427

1. use a proper translation. unless you have the minimal knowledge of japanese, dont use google.

2. chakra natures are one of our biggest problems. id recommend staying away from making those.

3. the nature is overpowered.

4. its interfering with canon, since the ten-tails has yet to confirm the usage of kekkei genkai, which i doubt. while the last point might not be plausible, the others make the article up for deletion. honestly, i think you cant make it up to part since celestial release just doesnt make much sense. i know you might be annoyed for having your work marked, but its the rules, basically.