Board Thread:Rebirth: Applications/@comment-1875854-20141001230515/@comment-24384232-20141014040458

Chix, you need to put a lot more effort into this. Make it a story of your character overcoming adversity or hell, make it somethin cliche but fun like a rival, brother or even his sensei becoming corrupt and trying to kill him. Maybe he retraced the legends of the gates in order to understand how they first became known. Maybe for him each gate works like an SSJ transformation, responding to an intense emotional state. Hell maybe he earned the right to learn them from a drinking game. Just have some fun with it.