Thread:KingJupiter/@comment-26193148-20150809232745

Here's my opinion. You asked therefore I shall deliver. I love the fact you're making a black character, (Keep it Nubian). Anime has always drawn some excellent ideas from black culture. Another thing I love is your dedication and hard work. You really went in on this char so keep it going youngion. Now what I dislike is basically the inspiration you drawn from Canon. I feel like you would be like on some next level shit, if you took the MS and Sharingan and what not, and then made it your own. My favorite example is Kazuhide. Kazuhide is perhaps my favorite Uchiha on NF because he takes every Uchiha technique and personalizes it. Uses it in a way that no uchiha has ever used it. I think that's where a lot of Uchiha hate come from. A badass clan but EVERYONE is doing the same thing with it. For exampled, What does the dempowered ms do that the regular doesn't? What does it symbolize. Also, as i said before, i hate this reincarnation shit. Being Hagoromo reborn...It detracts from him. Hagoromo did his thing, made his life, let Kiyoshi do the same. I feel like most people miss the one page of Naruto where Naruto proclaims that they are not Ashura and Indra. Tht was important. Naruto teaches us that destiny does NOT matter. So although they have the chakra, they aren't them. Same with Kiyoshi. If you was going to do Hagoromo, i think it would be cool if you like...at least made him evil. Do something different Nah meen? The last thing is give him a focus. A different more personal focus. Try making all his jutsu. I say a general rule should be that like....i dunno...a hand full of techniques you should make from scratch. Maybe 5 max of canon besides basic techniques.

Anyway. I do love your dedication to the character. And I think if you thought about what I said you would be on some next level shit. Ummm You don't have to. It's my opinion. Although I am God my opinion does not need to be followed. I don't care either way. Just my input and some stuff i noticed. One thing for sure, YOU ARE ONE OF THE MORE STORY DRIVEN PEOPLE HERE. And I fucks with that. A good story is what we all need right?


 * 1) SevenGod 