Thread:DazzlingEmerald/@comment-25436862-20141016040624/@comment-25436862-20141017001609

Ok, so giving up on chat.

http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Danger_In_The_Uzumaki_Name!

If you could find the time, I wouldn't mind some pointers form an expert/veteran. I find that the characters compliment each other extremely well, but the writing needs improvement.