Board Thread:Naruto Fanon's Review Board!/@comment-5892594-20150529035330/@comment-3030647-20150530233550

So...given that I'm assuming you want me to look at the abilities on its own? If so, I'm glad to oblige.

Immediately, I see the problem with Bobu's character and why people find him so "overpowered" so-to-speak. You state that Bobu is a specialist of Fuinjutsu and his Aburame Clan techniques, but on top of that, he's a master of all Five Elements? I understand where the sealing aspect does come from in terms of the sealing and release of these elements, however, I am lead to believe that the number of techniques you have devoted solely to elements detracts from his focus considerably.

But the issue most individuals probably have with him is...comparatively simple to what I'm describing. The issue I'm seeing, which might be a trend among your characters, I dunno, is that there is a significant lack of detail despite the considerable number of abilities, and mastery of those same abilities, that you place onto them. So, rather than telling you to get rid of anything or whatnot, I'd like you to explain the extent of Bobu's abilities in a proper fashion. Simply describing certain abilities over others, when you've also clearly given the others precedence is, in my view, not good practice. Alternatively, if you'd like to reduce your workload, I would personally recommend removing a considerable number of the elemental techniques in his possession. I understand that it's because of the Jutsu Seal but, frankly speaking, Bobu has enough of a capacity to find most elemental techniques unnecessary, no?

That's all I have to say.