Thread:Holly Winter/@comment-35271227-20190516002403/@comment-35271227-20190516225404

Mhmm. I'd like to explain something I've explained to the last two people who came from Naruto OC Wiki; this isn't that site, so don't write here as you would there. This is what I mean:


 * 1. Try to avoid referring canon characters and plots; it complicates things. here, we create our own characters within the universe of Naruto, not necessarily plop them haplessly into the middle of the canon.


 * 2. Power is fine, don't be afraid of it. Just needs a solid explanation and an actual purpose; no stacking just cuz.


 * 3. Lastly, - this one's just a suggestion - when you create an arsenal for a character, don't give them two abilities that do the same thing. For example, why give a character Fire Release: Fireball Technique and Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique? Of course, it's a bit more broad than that; take Keshin for example. None of his abilities overlap, but they all work together perfectly.

Sorry if I seem a bit pushy, just like to clarify things to people from that site...the other two were particularly irritating.

Also, maybe find an image for Shichi that isn't just a mannequin? :)