Talk:Kari Ketsueki

Kari Ketsueki and problems
"Kari is a high ranked shinobi hailing from The Land of Waterfall's village Takigakure."

Sounds, awkward. What is her rank? Can't you state that?

It should be "shinobi hailing from the village of Takigakure, in the Land of Waterfall.

When did user:DuelingArtist777 give you his permissions to use his Blood Release (DuelingArtist777) ?

As for background. It's utter nonsense. "Born 7 years after the fourth great shinobi war, Kari's life was complete. "

Either a major grammar issue or she died as soon as she was born. "First Takikage"? You say that she was born seven years after the fourth world war. Then can you explain, how is the First Takikage still alive?

"she was labeled to become the second Takikage at only age 11" pffft

Man, you smoking weed or anything?

"Although only being a in the academy Kari was already able to physically manifest chakra, into her favorite and one of her only used weapons her Psycho Scythe." Cool grammar eh?

"Kari has only been seen using the Tailed Beast Chakra Arms. Her reasoning behind this is, "Yes, I love being the Jinchūriki of Chōmei. But I will not use all of it's power every second of the clock. Furthermore Chōmei is too precious to me, for me just to use her/him all up."

What has this sentence ^ to do with her background? Don't you think this one should be placed in the abilities section?

"Kari's personality is more joyful than anyone ever. Her care for people is greater than that of her fathers. Unlike her ancestor Fū she cared about every human on the planet, foe or ally."

So, she is jovial. That's good. She cares for people, alright. Wait more than any of her fathers? How many fathers did she have?

And, finally I would advice you not to place the under construction tag/template under a particular section. Don't take this as a personal attack either. I know you get pissed off easily but this one is for your betterment!  The Deathbringer  (you are annoying!)   ''.