Thread:Berserkchart486/@comment-24660483-20151206182754/@comment-24660483-20151207043602

Of course, I totally understand that is what I need to work on, and that is my main focus. Let me explain a little of what I am doing currently too so you can understand where I am at and can help me accordingly.

Firstly, I am very familiar with the naruto series. I have read through the manga and watched all the episodes save for the filler crap. I also have a history of high level rpng on naruto sites (not to brag). That being said, I just want you to know that so you know I am not completely clueless lol though I know my page seems strange all things considered.

That being said, my idea with my character is unique, but I absolutely intend and am currently working on weaving him into the main story line with japanese names, canon history etc. To explain why things are so strange: Firstly, right now It is in a rough draft stage for sure. I am changing it ALOT. I have deleted whole story lines and changed things up innumerable times. So you will have to forgive me if things are a bit scattered.

Secondly, just to answer the issue of lore: His lore is meant to be different and noticeably so from most characters in the naruto series. He is an extra-terrestrial and extra-dimensional, and I wanted to take the opportunity to capitalize on how different such a being could really be. As far as picking a lore and it making sense, I wanted to take the opportunity to give you the summarized synopsis - tell me what you think.

He is a being from another dimension who, along with eleven other creatures like him live and rule on the dimension they inhabit. They, like humans, have physical and spiritual energy and mold it together to create techniques. Their physical and spiritual energy is greater because the dimension the are within is comprised of a higher concentration of physical and spiritual energy. Kind of like being in a cold room versus being in a really hot one.

Humans have KKG - so do they, kind of. Their spiritual energy, which determines their unique bloodline ability or elemental affinity. My character has, uniquely, three spiritual "energies" (elements"). So in translation, he has three elements he can use. These elements are from another dimension, though eerily similar to those of earth of course, just... enhanced you could say. For example, he has something called Ea release. Ea in translation is mokuton on steroids. Get the picture?

So his KKG are those elements. In addition to that, his race are made of physical constitutions much more powerful than that of humans. They are not made of flesh and bone, to put it simply. Alot of my explanation of his abilities goes into detail about the material his body is made of which ties his alien heritage and his KKG together to explain why.

All that being said, he has a lot of history, but that is being written to an end now, and I am designing a story arc for how he comes to earth. I'd love any suggestions and help, and If you have any questions or anything, feel free to contact me.

Thanks.