Thread:EmperorSigma/@comment-16832686-20131127020603/@comment-16832686-20131127025833

This is for Sigma, Ima do Iris nextI deleted the first one......So ima rewrite it. Okay, so

Chapter One: Bases

Every initial idea is a seed, which blossoms into a tree of imagination. But like every tree and seed, it remains connected to it's original roots. An Apple tree, is an apple tree. Nothing more, nothing less. No matter what size or shape the apples are, it will be an apple tree nonetheless. How does this connect to Sigma? Well, every character ever made comes from a seed of thought. Whether it came quick or took time, an initial thought started everything. And from that seed, a character is made. Whether the seed is original, from an anime or WHATEVER, it started somewhere. What I notice with Sigma is that he strayed from his Seed. He started as an Apple tree, and grew oranges, banana's and Pineapples. That sounds great, but the laws of nature forbids multitasking. A tree that just grows apples will always have better apples than one that grows oranges and banana's. ANYWAY.

A perfect example would be having a fire release user. You watch fairy tail one day, and see Natsu doing whatever he is famous for. The initial idea, or your "seed", is a fire release user. Now what happens next is crucial. You water the seed with ideas. You create connections and bigger creations. Fire becomes plasma, which becomes stars and so on and so forth. But these connections are what makes things legit or horrible. A legit character would have a sensible connection between different ideas. Like how a molecular structure is determined through their connections. Think about how graphite and diamonds are both carbon, but one is infinitely stronger. It's because it's connected better in a specific pattern. If your character is loose, it becomes graphite. If tightly compacted and put together, it becomes a beautiful diamond. No one is perfect, we all see things and want to add...God knows I did that with Koshiro, but still, that is when we create NEW characters. Even you said, he had so much shit you could not navigate. And there is a reason for that.

So I'm going to break Sigma down. I can see his seed, an Uchiha with badass skills. Not bad. Not horrible, pretty honorable. But then you started adding banana's and oranges to an apple tree. He's an Uchiha. He should have NO connection to wood release whatsoever. Only Uchiha who achieved it were major villains with flaws. Even Madara was near death when he mastered it. That's because other things came first. So to keep it related to the base of Uchiha, I'd say remove any wood release techniques. The Rinne i'm going to also say get rid of. Uchiha should not have the rinnegan. The Rinnegan are for shinobi with greater universal purposes. Madara was trying to change the world and nearly accomplished it. The Sage was a direct descendant of chakra itself (i'm ignoring pein because his belonged to Madara). You have the Eternal, that is good enough for an Uchiha. That is the GREATEST ANY UCHIHA SHOULD EVER GET. That is sticking to the Uchiha base and creating the Uchiha tree you meant to make. All that extra stuff is decoration you don't really need. You want a Rinnegan, or Wood Release, create that character. Because when you create those two characters, they will be infinitely better because you put your focus into it. Shinju/Jubi is a later chapter, because that, I don't even think should have ever crossed your mind as legit.

Base with Chakra natures. Chakra Natures are related to a character. Madara has only used Fire Release (besides haxxing wood release). Even tho, he has all of them. There is a reason for that. Madara is an Uchiha seed. So his base instinct is Fire Release. If he was from Kirigakure, it would be Water Release. If Sunagakure, it would be Wind Release. NOT SAYING ONLY HAVE ONE RELEASE. But if you have a seed, make it so his main chakra relates to that seed. it's also common courtesy. No one wants to fight a person who can become the fucking Avatar in a matter of minutes. That's no Bueno. You can have a few Chakra natures, don't get me wrong. but all of them, that's just madness. Even my Koshiro never used Lightning release besides once in battle (I use Koshiro because he has the same mistake as Sigma). So, look at Sigma and think about a combination. I say two chakra plus an elemental KG is enough. So i'd go with Fire, Wind and Blaze. Affinity, Booster, and Enhanced, BAM. But that is me. You can do Water Earth whatever. Just try to keep it connected. And it also goes with age. Why has he accomplished so much before forty? Look at Hashirama. His jutsu are only Wood Release. and that's his affinity so it makes sense. You want to have a more sensible character, keep it to your base.

"ability to gather small amounts of Natural Energy small storage of senjutsu" NO Bueno. No one is capable of gathering small amounts of Natural Energy. There is a reason why. NO ONE BESIDES HASHIMRAMA AND NARUTO CAN DO SO (Jugo with a KG). sage mode is an enhancement with very little to no drawbacks. I can use Sage mode without any harm on my body. And Sage mode=godliness. So to overcome this op'd move, there is a natural limit. You can only use it when staying still. In battle, it makes activating sage mode that much harder. so if a person DOES get it, he truly deserved it. And plus, an Uchiha sage is not needed.

The Jutsu goes back to my thoughts on Bases and Chakra. But it's a little controversial. There are members here that think little jutsu is better. WRONG. There are those who think a lot is better WRONG. It depends on your story, purpose, and ideas. EVERY ANIME HAS THAT ONE GUY WHO CAN DO EVERYTHING. Magi: Sinbad, Naruto: Madara/Hashirama, DBZ: Goku, Bleach: Ichigo etc etc. So creating a character like that no worries. But don't do it just to do it. If your character is made to learn everything, okay. If your character is a badass, okay. But even then, only do it to relate it to your base. Don't go flying off on shit that makes zero sense just to be safe. '''ROLE PLAYING SHOULD NOT BE COMPETITIVE. IT SHOULD BE A FUN WAY TO CONNECT AND CREATE A GRAND STORY'''.

So I got the initial idea on base done, I believe..But I wanna say about the rinnegan. If you TRULY want to have it, discuss it. I personally am tired of seeing the Rinne. And wish people wouldn't use it like they do *used to love the Rinne* but yeah like i said earlier, I'm not perfect, no one is, just ask around and get other opinions.