Thread:NejiHyuga2/@comment-31437001-20170805092839/@comment-30241447-20170808090609

Ok, bud first off: how does Tenzo just shrug off two Scorch Release: Halo Hurricane Jet Black Arrow Style Zero? You can't just avoid that. Rewatch. Also rewatch. Second, you can't just block Kirin with a wind barrier. When Sasuke used it against Itachi, it blew up the entire Uchiha Hideout and nearly killed Itachi. He only survived because of Susanoo. You can't just block Kirin. Third, you're autohitting. You can't just say "the rain burned the three chunin". That's autohitting. It's gotta be something like "The storm clouds formed and the smell of impending rain hung in the air" or something. I'm just asking since this is gonna quickly turn one-sided.