Thread:Holly Winter/@comment-35271227-20190518014546/@comment-35271227-20190524014420

I suppose it could all sound weird; you came from Naruto OC wiki. But then again, they don't have anything - that I've seen - that's quality. All just characters that have been haplessly inserted into the canon, for the most part.

Of course, I said nothing to be demeaning in any way; your characters look good for first pages. Just keep fleshing them out and thinking them through, they have potential. :)