Thread:Sainami/@comment-6383890-20140403084122/@comment-5963425-20140423214955

Hey Roy, I’ve overlooked the points and I will admit that all looks fine with the exception of one. The last point is a bit too much to get away from the natural death, without an actual reason to be sealed away, only to survive. Sealing yourself is much harder than you would imagine, I’d either expand on that point or leave it at rest and go with the natural death of your character.

I’ll judge it after you’ve decided what to do with the last point.