Thread:FileDestroyer/@comment-4097945-20121013084435/@comment-4097945-20130811113648

There's not much wrong with him: his name is not good, you just don't use English names for Japanese characters, it looks cheesy and of bad taste.

Also, he's a Senju and has Sharingan. That's seen as an excuse for power. He has an explanation as of why he has the Sharingan, but you need more than that. Take it from the page for now, and after thinking about how he could have gotten it, ask an admin if they approve of your idea. If they don't, it's best to not use it at all and create original things for him, like more abilities related to his Lightning Release and his signature technique.