Talk:Noryokugan/@comment-24267641-20150813172638

Hey Prince. I know that your work is always very science-based, but I believe that at least one point in this article requires explanation. I personally do not believe that "It is also immune to genjutsu" is sufficient. My quarrel is not with the effect (though in my opinion that is a bit much. Resistant, yes, but immune?), but with the lack of explanation over how this effect is achieved. Secondly, although the article repeatedly states that this is not a dojutsu, it is slightly self-contradictory, "Chakra viewed from the dojutsu is viewed in a color and energy spectrum, similar to that of radiation and a color scale." Sorry to criticise, but just thought that the article could be improved with some extra explanation and editing.