Thread:Sainami/@comment-1875854-20140224231440/@comment-5963425-20140225165035

I see you have changed the technique again. But, it is still incomplete to be approved so to speak. You have described that you have three beasts that each can control one element. I’d advice to describe what each beast can do with their nature, to prevent misunderstandings and that you know what the limits of the beast are. Give them a twist into their personality with the element they control, to make it more suitable. And then write out, properly, the weaknesses of each beast.