Thread:Uzuchiha123/@comment-25436862-20141219043523/@comment-25436862-20141219150538

Cool. I do not mind if you use that. Just a minor thing that makes the writing sound better. You will notice a drastic improvement in your writing as times goes on, but only if you seek improvement. I've been writing in my spare time since elementary school and have always looked to improve. You obviously have good ideas, so keep up the good work.