Thread:Mr.Ace101/@comment-30246837-20120610143053/@comment-5093615-20120618095240

Okay here is my idea. its part 1 though, In konoha the hokage gets wrongfully informed that a S-rank criminal is supposed to infiltrate konoha to take several forbidden scrolls that includes Summoning: Impure World Reincarnation and the Rasenshuriken, report saids he was last seen near the border. Therefore the hokage assigns Ryu,yuki, and rath to capture this criminal before he/she comes near the village. Unbeknownst to the hokage the one who informed the hokage was The infiltrator. So when team 21 journeys towards the border they encounter the supposed criminal and quickly ryu uses Wind Release: Vacuum Bullets towards his target while Yuki uses Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon at the criminal and rath uses Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique. however daishiro effortlessly dodges the incoming jutsu's. And of course team 21 is baffled that someone could just dodge an attack like that and not get hurt. Well anyways ryu responds by saying "Wha... what do you want with the forbidden scrolls? their not yours, You can't go around stealing other villages jutsu's you pathetic criminal!" daishiro smiles and in a playful tone" You think i'm a criminal? hahahaha geez you got crappy intel kid, hehehe well i'm here to capture and subdue that "criminal"  your talking about." Ryu interrupts " your lying the hokage told us that your the criminal". Daishiro now in a serious voice " look i'm not here to fight you guys, i'm here to save konoha" ryu now confused " wait.... your really not a criminal and you want to save konoha?" daishiro remarks "Yes, i'm not a criminal and konoha is currently be infiltrated as we speak, The infllitor gave the hokage that false report so that you guys can delay me of my pursuit of him,Anyways If we stay here any longer he's going to do alot more than steal those forbidden scrolls" Rath replys " like what?" . daishiro now crossing his arms " Oh you know the usual. He'll kill the hokage,burn down a few houses,kill some people. and make konoha vulnerable to attacks from rival villages" Team 21 when they heard that the were shocked, ryu then exclaims "look i don't trust you or anything but if the things you say are true then we have to go back to konoha really fast" yuki in a worried tone" Umm...ryu we wont have enough time", Rath  states"Yeah, Yuki is right we wont make it" Ryu now angered " Dammit do we have a teleportion jutsu?" daishiro remarks" oh i do  hold let me see.... here we go Space-Time Migration. In a split second team 21 and daishiro are in front of konohas entrance, Ryu in a excited tone" wow how did you do that?". daishiro in a impatient voice " i don't have enough time to tell you, Anyways lets go to the hokages residence he's must likely there" Team 21 nodded their head at daishiro and quickly ran across the rooftops and towards the  hokages residence when they reach there. daishiro stops and tells team 21" i must go alone if you guys come along with me you will surely die". Ryu grabs daishiro and looks him in the eye " your not the boss of us, you can't tell us what to do!" daishiro pulls his arm away from ryu " i know i'm not the boss of you, however this is my mission" Ryu  replies" Okay, we'll let you go but what is your name?". daishiro proundly responds  " I'm daishiro Kimza of yoshigakure from the land of plasma, but we'll talk right after i kick this infiltrators ass, so see ya" daishiro faster than a blink of an eye enters the hokages residence. daishiro thinks to himself ' yep. no doubt about it. its his charka alright" daishiro quietly walks towards the forbidden jutsu room. And out of nowhere  infiltrator grabs  daishiro by the neck and seemingly snaps his neck. Infiltror with  pride proclaims " HAhah too easy, this is what they would sent to go after me? hahaha". with the infiltror not knowing daishiro was charging up his "Kokurai", daishiro then jumps off from the ceiling and runs at the infiltor. striking the infiltor with the kokurai so hard that he he flew from hokages residence to the cemetery obliterating several tombstones. Daishiro thinks to himself " Oh man, thats going to come out of Purazumakage wallet to pay for that" .                                         Well I this is my idea i haven't decided about towards the ending, sorry if some parts and dialogue don't make sense lol.