Talk:Izaya/Archive I

Almost Complete
Izaya is nearly done! Just write in something for his background, and I can accept him. I do have some reservations about one of his techniques, however. His transformation technique is written in absolute terms about how it can't be dispelled or ended without his consent. I think that's not really possible, when you account for the fact it requires a constant source of chakra to power it (keeping it on at all times would exhaust him, and it would end) and concentration (if he gets knocked out, stunned, or disabled, it would end). If you used fuinjutsu to reinforce the technique, maintaining Henge after receiving attacks should be possible. His release is fine, except there won't really be a massive number of dead bodies lying around the event, so I don't really think he'll be able to fully leverage this release's strengths. Please make sure to finish your character by the 14th! I'm approving him, but Izaya's approval is probationary- if your character isn't done by the 14th, I'll retract it.