Thread:Kazeyo/@comment-6383890-20140427035508/@comment-1520269-20140427200610

While the idea of a juvenile beast formed from the residual chakra of the hachibi is not a bad idea by itself, the way that you've presented it is a bit off. Most troubling in the source of the beast. If it was that easy to form a new bijuu, then nearly any battle with including a jinchuuriki or bijuu would result in secondary beasts coming into existence. Additionally, it seems a bit unreasonable that hachibi chakra + tree would result effectively in an ink based beast...since that really doesn't incorporate the tree portion of its background. On a side note, the beast's ability set and connection to it's prospective host is just fine. As such, if you can work out a more reasonable genesis for the creature, you'll be good to go.