Thread:Njalm2/@comment-3001427-20130423025956/@comment-3403804-20130423115625

I've read through the application carefully Void. I have to admit that I find the great deal of angst in this story to be a rather common feature when it comes to the Sharingan, and a road which many other possible applicants have abused before. Luckily, Yasakani's story is both detailed and quite original, and it, unlike the vast majority of other stories on the wiki seems to be made with focus on the character, and not the Sharingan itself. I applaud you for that, however, personally I feel its nessecary to say that I'm not impressed with him being a remnant from the second war. I feel that its abit too easy and simple for an Uchiha; it also has a rather immense amount of implications. One of these would be Obito, and why he was unaware of another Uchiha in the midst of Akatsuki, I'm aware that Yasakani would've hid his Sharingan as best he could, but I don't believe we ought to assume that Obito is easily fooled. But I honestly don't have any major complaints with Yasakani's backstory except for what I've listed, its general, and somewhat boring in certain places but the concept itself is indeed solid and original, which are my prime requisites for a background.

I'm happy that you want to make people aware of the power of the regular Sharingan as opposed to merely using the MS, like pretty much everyone else does, its a nice change. The regular Sharingan, in and of itself is a vastly understimated Kekkei Genkai, and is often bypassed entirely for the Mangekyo. I've got confidence in your abilities Void, so I'm pretty certain that you know what you're doing - besides, you do raise some interesting points and the way you elaborate abit about the Sharingan's abilities does show quite abit of promise.

Once again, I am indeed impressed with the fact that you don't require the Mangekyo. I'm also glad that you don't mention Yasakani as a prodigy, as that is something which is exceedingly common among Uchiha characters, even if he was, at this point its moot due to his advanced age. Which would in the Shinobi world translate to great experience and power. I'm quite excited to see where you'd go with this, along with how much of the Sharingan's potential you want to tap into - it makes me expect good things from Yasakani.

Lastly, thank you Void for your honesty. You've made it pretty clear that half the reason you want the Sharingan is due to its sheer potential and how that very power is often overlooked, the other half is just pure undiluted wankery and an admiration of its immense potential. You're being honest in that it appears you want it, not as much for the sake of your characters "plotline" but more because of its power, while this is normally a big no-no in my eyes - your honesty about it is what truly shines here. I approve your request for the Sharingan in light of these points.