Thread:Jouchiro Avashi/@comment-24438896-20140731122452

Hey, I'm a new user. Although I'm new around here, I seem to have the ability to create decent stories, and I was just admiring how chapter one of Legacies was written. It was short and simple, but it was great to see how Naruto grew up. One piece of advice though (no pun intended), it was a tiny bit too short. Just a paragraph or two to add on would be great. 