Thread:Njalm2/@comment-5266944-20130318210735/@comment-3403804-20130320094108

You're entirely correct, Narutorules, I do not want to give you the Rinnegan, I really don't. Which is the reason we have this test in the first place, for you to prove me wrong. The reason I'm still not willing to give you the Rinnegan boils down to several things. Experience, Motivation and Grammar. The first is about your experience as a user on this site, as well as a roleplayer, I do not feel safe entrusting the Rinnegan to you. Secondly is your motivation for getting the Rinnegan which I've deduced is pretty much only for the sake of giving your character a priveligied ability and of course, power. Thirdly, there's your grammar which you should conciously strive to improve by running your work through spellchecks and grammar checks - you can find any of these by simply searching in Google.

I never once intended for this to be easy, the reason I'm asking you to do everything on your own is because that the Rinnegan must be employed in a unique manner, unless you do everything on your own, it will lead to all those things that I want to prevent by handing it out to someone who doesn't appear to have a good idea about how to use it. That was the purpose of the jutsu test, to see if you had an idea what you were doing, and if you had an overall direction in which you wanted to take the character. I see little to nothing of this in your character - he's an incomplete character without the Rinnegan, and I'm only willing to award it to a character who, even without the Rinnegan is indeed excellent. I would honestly reccomend that you drop the Rinnegan until you've accumulated more experience and skill, and when your motivations for wanting it are less arbitrary, also, when you've fixed up the grammar errors on his page.