Talk:Ryan Uchiha

Something to consider
I can see that you've just barely started on this character, and while there I know you've yet to complete his page there are a couple of issues that are of some concern. In the most simplest form your character is quite reminiscent to another character on the site, more specifically Ryun Uchiha. While this may not be deliberate both the incredible similarities in the name, and the fact that your character is a sage as well, are a definite cause for question. Additionally, Ryan's Mangekyou awakening is very similar to Obito's situation. While this isn't absolutely unheard of, I think that a more original scenario would suit your character better.

On a final, and more positive note, the Cold Fire tech is pretty cool, literally, but it doesn't seem like a genjutsu to me. I actually think it would make an interesting MS technique, kind of like an antithesis to Amaterasu in a manner of speaking. Who knows, it could be your character's personal Mangekyō ability. With solid ideas like that tech, I really hope you can bring your character's originality up to par.

-- Kaze (Come forth and speak) 23:04, July 31, 2013 (UTC)