User talk:YaijunRinnegan

Information you ask for
"If Tasogare goal is to steal chakra and kekkei genkais I'm guessing you are thinking about creating a jutsu like the chimera technique"well somehow like,that,we are more on creating a Doujutsu for it,you know.And new Uchiha's are not allowed on the Wiki or Forums anymore,sorry.--Shien 09:29, December 14, 2009 (UTC) If you want to join,I will do what you tell me to do with you char,even kill it,even if this is a little strange,but ok.--Shien 15:20, December 20, 2009 (UTC) Not really--Shien 07:40, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Come on Chatango right now
Do what the title says.Lol

Hello
I see you must be a new user and you seem to be an interesting one.First of all please visit: http://narutofanon.chatango.com/ immediatly,second of all, if you submit your character on the companion forum i would ask you if you want to RP.--Shien 18:29, December 6, 2009 (UTC) I want to RP you because you remind me of myself when i first found this wiki and it would get out to be a very interesting battle if we are fair-play to eachother.By fair-play I mean respecting the rules of roleplaying like dont dodge every attack,let your oponnent decidee wheter the attack hits them or not etc.For more information about the rules got to the forum section of the companion fourum.And i will consider making an Okamizuka thanks for taking your time to read the message.--Shien 10:23, December 8, 2009 (UTC)I also made an organization named Tasogare,it is an organization that serves evil and you were the first man i thought of when i made it,if you want to join please contact me.--Shien 18:42, December 8, 2009 (UTC) I amm glad you will join my organization and no,you can not have just a link to your charater's page on the wikia,it has been restricted to do 2 weeks ago by Ten.But you CAN copy/paste from the wiki page any informations you will need to fill the necessary template you will find in Guide to how to Submit you character by AzureDragoon.Greetings--Shien 18:09, December 10, 2009 (UTC) Tasogare is an organization like Akatsuki,but it's goal is too gather special chakras (Bijuu chakra and Kekkei Genkais).It is even allied with Akatsuki,Shien Uchiha and Madara being very good friends,and Ryuuro Hyuga being a member of both (no,he is not undercover,nor he is a double agent).It's rivals are Hanmandang and any organization that serves peace.P.S.The guy you want to train with ,Kazeyo Fuyutama, Is the leader of Akatsuki,so he is allied with this organizationn.Greetings --Shien 08:24, December 11, 2009 (UTC) Hmm,make a link to the fanon,well you click the http// button and allow anything and then copy/paste the link into the box and specify under which name it will appear on the page.That should be all.Always there for help--Shien 17:09, December 12, 2009 (UTC) Yes,seijuu,it takes a while,it took 2 weeks for me...after re-re-mades.It is harder than you think,but maybe you can go at it from the first time.--Shien 07:56, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

U can make a Kurosaki
the more the merrier. But some admins already have (or had) issues with my Dojutsu, so just keep it as a regular/and or Mangekyou Kaminarigan.--Ahatake Noriko Kurosaki 04:42, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Regarding Kyosuke's Sensei
Overall I have no problem having Kazeyo Fuyutama being your characters sensei, but I would have a single important condition. Your character Kyosuke, may have some issues being accepted by the majority of the Narutofanon community due to his odd origins. Despite this if you were to alter a few key parts of his abilities he could be a unique and interesting character. It says that he has a unique dojutsu that was formed from the Byakugan, Sharingan, and the Rinnegan, and that he can manipulate all of the elements (including elemental fusions). While I don't mind the dojutsu...I would have a request. In my opinion Kyosuke's eyes should not empower a fusion of all the dojutsu his bloodline, but a moderate abilities such as the visual perception of chakra and chakra points, and increased clarity. As for the elemental use, I'm afraid that your character would be banned if you could use all of the elements. To counter this, I noticed something about your character using divine wind and azure flame techniques. Personally I would find it interesting if once your character unlocked his mixed blood, mutated kekkei genkai that he lost the ability manipulate regular elements and could only use odd variations of the elements. Wind's would be "Divine Wind" and Fire's would be "Azure Flame." The variations on the elements you could make up later.

To recap Kyosuke's bloodline would allow something on the line of:

1. Visual perception of chakra and points

2. Enhanced Clarity (Allows a user to identify quick moving objects quicker)

3. Variations on the elements (Because he can no longer use the originals)

If your character can be developed to become something more unique and less like all the doujutsu blended together...my character Kazeyo Fuyutama will surely be his sensei.

Now you have to salvage your character
It would seem that you were hit up for godmodding. While I'm not surprised since you gave your character too many abilities(namely elements), I am willing to offer you a quick and easy way to fix the state of your character. If you do not desire my help you are free to stop reading here and have your character deleted. If you follow this laid out plan Kyosuke Hyuga will be saved, but it requires almost complete obedience to the following plan:

1. Make his mother just a normal Hyuga (Not a Hyuga-Uchiha Hybrid)

2. Make his father just a wolf demon (With no Beast Rinnegan)

3. His abilities can revolve around the following:

--->Wild Beast Trigrams (Decent Idea)

--->Byakugan (Think about changing the description of the dojutsu)

--->Chakra of the Divine Race (Excellent, but consider making it impossible to mold normal elemental chakra)

--->Demon Sword (Should explain any abilities it may have)

--->Wolf Summons (Nice way to round out the character)

4. His abilities shouldn't include the following:

--->Sharingan (The site isn't really allowing anymore sharingan users at the moment)

--->Rinnegan (Unnecessary power for you character)

--->Crystal Element (If you want a character with crystal, make another character)

If you can adhere to the following, your character shouldn't be up for deletion anymore and will be ready for tutelage under Kazeyo Fuyutama. I wish you luck on reviving your character on this site.

Divine Beast Eye
Well literally it would be on the lines of Kamujuugan or Kamijuugan (Both use 神獣眼 as their kanji), but this sounds would be incorrect so I suggest that you go with Seijuugan (聖獣眼). This means Sacred Beast Eye and isn't as thrown together as the former.

of course!
WAHOO!--Ice Kitsune 02:28, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

kk thanks
and ur welcome. remember what the Two Tails does. It gives the user animal like abilties, like the Inuzuka clan.--Ice Kitsune 02:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ALERT!
The animal abilities are around even without his cloak u know--Ice Kitsune 03:35, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

hmmm
the two tailed dog increases it's hosts senses such as the sense of smell and hearing to near super human level. and like the nine tails it's can create a chakra cloak. If the user has enough control it can create a replica of the Two Tailed dog's true form, and is able to fire off destruction balls. And it gives the user a Unique healing abilties that can heal broken bones, restore blood etc. But they cannot be used on the host. as such he has enhanced healing of his own.--Ice Kitsune 04:05, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

alright--Ice Kitsune 05:42, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I was wrong
The Two Tails doesn't have healing abilties. sorry. He still has his own enhanced healing but he can't heals others--Ice Kitsune 07:27, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Not a Problem
It's cool, and don't beat yourself up over it, it was your first draft.

If you have anymore errors and need help, just ask! :) --TTS 18:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

please donot edit my articles
Please refrain from editing my articles...its very rude to do, with out my permission--Shodaime Gen'eikage (speak to me 19:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Its cool, i just get annoyed from people editing my things and not asking me 1st.....the last guy who did it, tried to add a crazy curse mark to my ninja, and he kept doing it even after i reverted it back. so yeah, and thanks about the compliment about my chakra alchemy ability. --Shodaime Gen'eikage (speak to me 19:46, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

U can't
I dnt like wolves and the False Tailed Beasts r based on the chinese Zodiac--Ice Kitsune 21:52, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

not really. it's only abilities are enhanced senses, chakra cloak, and enhanced healing of the user--Ice Kitsune 23:16, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ask Ten. I used to know but I forgot.--Ice Kitsune 00:32, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

takes awhile--Ice Kitsune 01:19, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Kyosuke's Sensei
I have no problem with Kazeyo Fuyutama being your character's sensei now...all you have to do is make sure your approved on the forums (If your not already) and message me when you want to start a Rp.

One more thing....why did you choose my character?

um
what's that Demonic Redemption for?--Ice Kitsune 03:05, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

alrigh
wouldn't use that in combat tho.--Ice Kitsune 03:26, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

hmm
anything the user wants, so long as it ain't godmodded--Ice Kitsune 06:42, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

sure
and the same is going on with me and Umi. She belongs to my friend, Umi-chan--Ice Kitsune 04:55, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

enhanced strength. then u can come up with anything u want that aint godmod--Ice Kitsune 05:05, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not allowing it
It resembles Vizards too much. Don't do it--Ice Kitsune 01:27, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

hell yeah -.- --Ice Kitsune 21:08, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

go to the chat. He's always there. http://narutofanon.chatango.com/ --Ice Kitsune 21:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Itachi 24
hi this is itachi 24 thanks for reading my noes rasengan and about that element i didn't want to use Lightning for this raengan any other thing to say tell me

hey
hey i had an idea about a character named Hyden Ryuzuka if that's cool with you

hey
sorry i didnt leave my name about Hyden Ryuzuka Itachi 24

Itachi 24
about the Seijuugan what does it look like

how do you get that box like naruto and others where their pic's are inside About teh Crystal Release what Elements make it do u think u can get a pic for Seijuugan it would help others understand what it look's like Itachi 24

can u give him a almost sasuke kinda look i'll make the page right now

can u make hyden a sword user

i made the page for him can u delete the black hair thing i put anything for the text

sorry i didn't use the hyden guy u can use him as u wish i have new idea's for a person his name is Dante Takahashi sorry i didn't use hyden i just wanted to help u with a name for a person yeah the Phoenix release is almost like blaze release the flames are hotter atleast. make hyden cool for both of us

your friend

Itachi 24

hi friend
can you make me a box for my character Dante Takahashi can u add a extra box for kekkei genkai thanks oh can u tell me how to make thoese box's and how to put the pic's for character's in their

Life is...
Life is sort of an omnipotent being in my fan-fic Naruto: Bundo Shinsei. If you look at my profile, you'll notice that all the articles I create pertain to it. --TreattheSickness 23:54, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

All set
He is all set, but you don't have to RP on the forums. We lifted the ban of RP's on the wikia. --Seireitou-shishō (瀞霊冬川平) 22:01, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

sorry
sorry about that i just started and i am a fresh noob and still lerning but please dont get me band

from itachi 24
hey hows it going can you do me a favor in need a box for my character Dante Takahashi can u make his age 16 and can you get the pic of madara's brother as he's for me and a box for his sharingan and Mangekyo sharingan and for his chakra type can you put Fire,Lightning,Water amd Blaze.

Itachi 24
he is half uchiha i was going to make him naruto's Cousin

so i need permision to give him Sharinag ok how about giving him rinnegan " Sorry i dont know how to spell it my favorite is sharingan"

okay thats a good idea can you help me with a name for it " your a really cool person on here thanks Friend if you dont mind me calling you my friend"

okay i would love to join with your rp i dony know how to make the info box or that other fancy stuff for the page im still trying to learn how

i got an idea for a dojutsu i dont have a name for it but it can use Amaterasu and for Genjutsu it uses that move Danzo uses when he was Fighting Sasuke

okay how about the Dojutsu you made can he use it that page is alittel confusin do i just start talking on there how about that Hybrid dojutsu you gave your character

okay thanks for that name for the Eyes how about we make a clan with those eyes and some jutsu for them

no i havent im about to i was going to start on Takagan.

yes you can edit the takagan page it is like it yours and mine since you help me with the name and gave me the idea

so those can be his Kekkie Genkai Yin Release Yang Release and Takagan can u make a info box so i can get started and the thing for the content and other stuff like that so we can use him in your RP"

so what did you change on takagan can you get a picture for dante for me and a box Hey what do you think is the Elements that make up the dark release

thanks i will get started so we can use him in your RP

how do i edit his personal box i was going to give him some jutsu's

Its okay im a bad teacher to but you can still tell me for jutsu's you can give him some regular water jutsu and for lightning that jutsu Killer bee uses with his swords and for his trump jutsu Chidori Rasengan chidori katana and some genjutsu can you still tell me how to do it myself and can you give him that sword style killer bee uses i like sowrds so i atleast want him to be a sword user too.

Okay i will try its the second green puzzle pice right

got it
hey check out dante tell me if anyting else need to be improved

okay ill check my spelling can you tell me what the gaurdian armor is

okay so do you mind if i copy that from him

hey is see your working on your on characters have you seen the Yang release cresent moon i made for dante your characters are awsome i got an idea for the takagan i was going to make it like naruto demon eyes but with a dark red color and about the yin release what type of jutsu can be made from that i think its good energy right.

hey i was just looking at keshi why does it have to things for owner one of them is blank

aw man can you fix dante my computer lost power when i was adding a jutsu sorry thanks for that

hey can you find a picture for dante i was going to try to make the takagan OMG thats cool im a huge devil may cry fan that is a good pic of dante to use for him since his name is dante LOL can you put that in his box

Itachi 24 02:59, January 31, 2010 (UTC)Itachi 24Itachi 24 02:59, January 31, 2010 (UTC)