Talk:Meeting of the Metal Masters

Ahem
Zeref, you're gonna have to rewrite your latest post, as in this you've broken the compact between roleplayers by directly interefering with your opponent without their permission. The mistakes you've made are Godmodding and metagaming, I'll explain where in your post you made these mistakes and ask you to correct them promptly.

"What are you trying to do? Flying Thunder God ? or perhaps Geomagnetism? Whatever it is,not happening" - This is my first concern, as its the first mistake you actually make here. This is what we refer to as Metagaming, I'm reffering speciically to that bolded word. There is no way for Shisui to be aware of this techniques name, given how he and Sannoto have never actually met before. Simply remove the bolded reference and you've cleared this issue.

Secondly is the Godmodding concern, which I'll detail shortly. As before, the part that you need to change is bolded

Sannoto's clones were strangled and forced to get cancelled then another String appeared on Sannoto's right leg;but the strings were not ordinary they had something special in them as when he pulled them Sannoto's skin tore and started bleeding as he tightened his grip the string began to cut his flesh

This is Godmodding, your narrative control extends to your own character, and to the environment but NO further. In this post, you take narrative control over Sannoto himself without Beserk's explicit permission. You decide for yourself whether or not your attack connects, this means that you've just breached the roleplay and Beserk has the right to cancel it if he so desires. This breach is quite minor however, and its easily remedied.

Thirdly, there's another mistake, but it's quite minor as opposed to the second one. I'll detail it below

Shisui completed his sentence he pulled his arm which appeared to be holding Wire Strings as he pulled them This is a second case of metagaming, as you've not even hinted at the fact that there are wires spread over the battlefield before, the wires simply appear out of nowhere, without any justification for their appearance whatsoever. This should also be changed, but its not that important. Simply keep it in mind til next time. --Njalm (talk) 19:05, March 12, 2013 (UTC)