Board Thread:Naruto Fanon's Review Board/@comment-26576038-20150531055901/@comment-5892594-20150531110929

Gandiba
 * Great Explanation
 * Extensive Elaboration
 * Doesn't seem to blend in well in the Naruto world, but blends in well with the fanon basis for Zenjou (and ties in well to his background, which you established)
 * More explanations for Bukijutsu would be useful - Just saying that you possess a conceptual bow doesn't really explain why you can deduce the instantaneous velocities of objects and weapons in mid-air, as well as the physical capability of a bow.
 * Awesome Bow Power (infinite draw weight), could have limitations however, else you could simply fire 100 ton arrows at everyone from several kilometres away.
 * Potentially too much explanation - You don't have to describe so much in regards to Zenjou's capabilities with the bow. Just saying that his skill allows him to achieve (strongest feat 1, 2, 3) is enough IMO

Shikotsumyaku:
 * How can your bones disappear as quickly as they appear (the metaphor you used), since on chat you said that they were actual bone and not chakra bone, it should be impossible for them to disappear.
 * How do you manipulate bones from a distance if your constructs do not have chakra (as you tell me)? You'd have to send your chakra over like other techniques.
 * Overclocking - Forcing your bones to grow at extreme rates is impossible for the physical body - you'd need a source of energy/matter to create bone that is more than twice your body mass. There is a reason why chakra is used in the original series IMO
 * Extreme Power - A concern because you are capable of creating entire forests with minimal chakra, with each of the bones as hard as diamond. How would anyone fight you if you have an absolute control over the battlefield? Granted I know that you are Kage-level and that you may need these powers to deal with other "Gods" among Ninjas, this remains a potential point of contention by others.
 * Durability - You probably can tell that it may be too overpowered here seeing that you can withstand a tailed beast's footstep
 * Regeneration - Surviving Dust Release head on is kinda hax.

Overall, really great character, good description and much elaboration, I can see very much effort put into your character, but there are areas which are kinda OP. That's all I have to say and really, OPness is prevalent throughout this wiki, so you can ignore that critique of mine if you wish.