Talk:Earth Style: Rasengun

Issue
Ok, I see you put some effort into this technique, but it has a few flaws. Firstly, it is missing an infobox which is located at Form:Jutsu. Secondly it lacks a purpose other than from what I can see as a "Rasengan-variant" which isn't needed unless it serves a real point as we have several, different and pointless variants.

Now onto its Shape and Nature manipulation. It is earth release which carries the traits of the Earth Nature (which we haven't seen in its raw form, unlike Lightning and Wind), which leads to one to ask why choose it? In the terms of Rasengan it requires one to consider different factors which in tern help shape the technique. You state in the drawback section that ''"To use this technique, the user has to have a considerable amount of strength in their arm. Because of its earth nature, it can weigh up to 200kgs. Kakashi Hatake said it is like having a massive boulder compacted to the size of a baseball.

But the most dangerous part is attempting to fire the rasengun. Following newton's 3rd law of motion, when the 200kg rasengun is fired, the user suffers the impact also. The rasengun can break, dislocate and even tear of the users entire arm if they are unprepared. For this reason, it can only be used once per battle unless the user is also using senjustu."''

This makes it clear that it isnt really effective in combat, nor is it logical to use if it has that much "weight" but also how does chakra have a weight to it? It doesn't add up and to require Sage Mode to use properly, it just seems like a Naruto rip off in the end. Please consider this advice, and in the long run please do not make a Rasengan variant, it isnt the only Jutsu in the Narutoverse, as well ass the fact that you fail to note how the user learned the Jutsu from a user of the parent technique Naruto, Kakashi, or Konohamaru. --The Twelfth Doctor (Appointments?) 18:08, June 6, 2013 (UTC)