Thread:Sainami/@comment-2185383-20140302190637/@comment-5963425-20140309114127

The application seems fine so far, but I’d think it can be improved a little before I officially approve it.
 * The technique itself is fine, but I wonder about the drawbacks of the technique:
 * Would someone with a strong willpower be capable of breaking the technique?
 * And could they also stop the technique of Kimi by locking her out from their mind?
 * Also, does she need to keep eye-contact with the person to mind-read, or can she move around?
 * In my opinion I’d not say this is the counterpart of Kotoamatsukami. A counterpart would stop Kotoamatsukami’s abilities, this does not. I’d say that it is a related technique that has similarities with Kotoamatsukami.
 * If you want this, I’d advice to remove Tsukuyomi unless you have a proper reason to keep it.