Thread:Fuurinjou/@comment-24012990-20131010075423/@comment-24012990-20131011072238

Marvelous!! I hate to admit, but your concept of incorporating smaller characters as main characters in one specific arc is totally my thing, and it is undoubtedly rad. You may relate to this concept when Rock Lee was fighting with Gaara in Chunin exams, I thought this is it: I don't care about the plot, just let me have more of Rock Lee. But, as the arc progressed, Lee was once again made a secondary protagonist or a supporting character. There is a spin-off series going on in Chibi style of art, focusing on Lee, and you bet, it's so funny and interesting.

Talking about my character, Ryotaro Morita(~27), I made it this way, his father has prowess in using Creation of All things technique, and being the elder son, he was Naturally aligned to the 5 elements, as if those elements were having equal affinity to him. I know it sounds kinda childish, but yes, he is a super-character, who was the main Antagonist, until he learns about his truth of Surrogation, and that his father wasn't wrong. But they are already ambushed by Aria doho-dan (The Aryan Brotherhood), a powerful thug organization in alliance with some of the corrupt Samurais, and his father is killed. Later, he vows to seek vengeance and protect his siblings, who are 12 and 15 years old, and not super-characters like him. Eventually they seek negotiations, and those Samurais are brought to justice. Consecutively, in each arc, some of their Legendary father's tale is revealed by one of the characters, and they have their path guided by him. This pretty much happens for the first part of my story. I've managed to enter details about 20 or so characters, and what is left is joining their stories xD

What interesting about your story is that you've added a new Seven Phrofencies to the sotry, and I'm totally excited. Whether they will class the Ninja Swordsmen or help them, or whatever xD Thanks for Reading!! :D