Board Thread:Specific Characters Qualification Exam/@comment-4080775-20141218230531/@comment-8914761-20150107190343

Personality: 5/20


 * Your rating on this is low because its all clogged together into one thing. When saying how she is, provide a little example of a time where she displayed such feat/act. However, it wasn't all out BS so I'll give you credit where credit is due.

Appearance: 0/5


 * The section answers why. Very unorganized, didn't follow the manual of style.

Background: 5/30


 * First, why do you have a section named both "Senjutsu" (which would be in the abilities section), and Natural Energy. In all technicality those two are one thing. Additionally, why does is there no history about the character in general. All I see is stuff about the techniques you are trying to achieve. Add stuff about HER not just the techniques you are aiming for.

Abilities: 15/30


 * Much like Ash told me, this all I can give you because there isn't much to go by. However, I will also agree with Chix on how fast she mastered the Eight Gates. Also, Rasengan seems like it flew out of nowhere, something like a gamble to add. However, I can see a bit of a powerful outcome with the Rasengan & a Eight Gates user. Entire section, in my opinion, is very much incomplete.

Grammar: 8/10


 * It wasn't hard to read, but many things ran on.

Question 1: 50/50

Question 2: 40/50


 * Most I can give you here, just needed to expand on how she'd do it.

Question 3: 20/50


 * You didn't really explain how she'd grow...

Total: 143 out of 210 = FAILURE