Thread:Njalm2/@comment-10439484-20130605021650

I'm a new user here and I read the policy about the Rinnegan that Chrono, Kaze and the others introduced to me. I would like for one of my characters to use the Rinnegan, if you may. His name is Jinwu Azashiro, the Seventh Hokage. He's going to be the only character using it.

Backstory on how he got it:

Jinwu, hoping to discover many secrets of the shinobi world, traveled to various places, studying mystical lore of much kind. Discovering the Mountainside Graveyard, he ventured deep within it's confines. Finding the remains of much experimentation, he looked at the research notes that were left behind by both Orochimaru (who visited and used the place after the Fourth Shinobi World War prior to abandoning the place) and Madara Uchiha, who stayed there for a brief amount of time until his death. Once reading everything, he understood the slab that was hidden underneath the Naka Shrine. He also discovered the secret of activating the legendary Dojutsu of the Sage who sealed Datara the Ten-Tails - the Rinnegan. He had to infuse the DNA of a Senju and an Uchiha together to gain it. Already having Uchiha blood inside him due to his mother's heritage of being an Uchiha, he had to find Senju DNA. Continually looking, he came across the remains of a white clone of a musterious creature. Implanting some of it's DNA into him he started to feel a weird sensation, his body responding to the DNA. He started to act weird as it was in immense pain. He ran across the place to the shore of an underground lake located in the compound. He passed soon after. Ten days later, the pain stopped and he felt a change. Looking in the reflection of the water, he saw that his eyes changed to a ripple-like pattern. Remembering the notes detailing it's identity, he laughed maniacally saying he finally gained what he truly wanted, which helped him further his goal. He marked the place with a special seal so that he can come back anytime, using it as his secret base.

Associated Techniques: He may use this ability on surrounding opponents, similar to Shinra Tensei, however he may control where they're sent flying to a greater degree. Chakra itself cannot be manipulated by this technique, and hence when it enters the radius in which this ability is executed, it will be repelled as though it impacted upon a gravitational wall.
 * Shinra Tōsekiki (神羅投石機, Almighty Ballistae): Shinra Tōsekiki allows Jinwu to suspend physical matter within a five meter radius of himself and suspend them in the air, be they stationery or incoming, before launching them as projectiles at terrifying velocities (like bullets), making them virtually impossible to dodge without the aid of speed enhancements or position-altering space-time ninjutsu, and defend against without an extremely durable defense, although the materials which compose it may be rendered ineffective, depending on what elements are being manipulated as projectiles.


 * Kussetsu Tensei (屈折天征, Universal Refraction): Jinwu locks an incoming, elemental technique, absorbs it via physical contact with his palm and recreates it (in his palm), before unleashing it at the initial instigator. So long as the technique absorbed is elemental, it can be absorbed, so long as it can be created through regular means (meaning that techniques associated with Kekkei Genkai other than the Rinnegan cannot be recreated (although they can still be absorbed (if elemental))).


 * Shinra Seigyo (全能制御, Almighty Control): Targeting the base-terrain in front of him, Jinwu traps a significant portion of it within a large cube of gravity, levitating the entrapped element(s) up into the air. At the flick of his hand, the cube explodes, leading to the previously-entrapped element(s) to gush out towards the target location in front of Jinwu's standing position. Alternatively, he can have the cube implode, gravitationally-crushing all tangible elements inside into an absolute mess. In the case of water for example, he can via this technique, generate a massive tidal wave, or if he opts to manipulate a larger cube, generate a colossal tsunami. Of course, this technique affects just about every tangible terrain in existence.


 * Kami e no Fukujū (神への服従, Obedience to God): The user increases the gravity around one area, crushing the terrain beneath the influx of pressure and those situated above it. Depending on the amount of force the user puts in this technique, it can easily shatter wood, bones, metal, or stone walls. Generally the more elevated those caught within the technique's range, the more damage they will take when their descent is accelerated. This technique is especially effective in both damaging and immobilizing those within its range, however the user is unable to utilize any others until this has ended. Depending on how long this technique is active, the cool-down that ensues afterwards (five seconds being the minimum) is extended as a result.

The gravity composing the armour can be manipulated to a reasonable extent, easily wrapping over handheld weaponry either to amplify the armor's own range and capabilities in deflecting external objects, and as mediums for other Deva Path-affiliated techniques. Ultimately, it gives Jinwu an edge against other melee fighters, promoting usage of Nintaijutsu.
 * Gravity Armour (威厳の鎧, Igen no Yoroi):This technique allows Jinwu to generate an invisible, gravitational force-field with a thickness of, and spanning out 5cm from his body. From what can be considered a more supplementary version of Shinra Tensei, it deflects physical, exterior forces whilst promoting a limited form of levitation.

It also has the ability to bypass the powers of a chakra-cloaked opponent, touching the "substantial body" beneath whatever protection the chakra-generated armour provides, such as in the cases of a bijū's chakra cloak and those wrapped in Lightning Release Armour. This technique may not be applied to attacks that do not originate from Jinwu's body save for weapons.

That's all. I hope I can get a positive response from this. See ya soon, I hope. 