Thread:Holly Winter/@comment-35271227-20190518014546/@comment-35271227-20190520003955

I've been looking at her off and on, so I've seen her. Here's my opinion.


 * The character herself is fine; like her design and all. She seems like a fun person and a capable fighter.

On the flipside - pertaining to her structure - I have a few issues; just from my standpoint, though.


 * Rather than listing each and every one of her techniques in her abilities section, maybe do what I do with Keshin; give a summary of the different uses and such.
 * With that in mind, I think that goes for the part that begins her abilities. I think it's unnecessary to make a strengths and weaknesses category. By the time someone's done reading the entire page, they should be able to tell what she's good and bad at based on how you described the ninjutsu bit.
 * Crimson Shock is basically Chidori; maybe just give her that and explain why hers is red?
 * Finally, there's the technique thing I was mentioning to you. Try to keep them cohesive; not overlapping.

I think with time she'd be a great character. Sorry if I word things funny, lmao.