Thread:Phoenix Red/@comment-4347663-20130818192458

Hello, East.

Here's what you posted in our role-play:

''"You interestingly interest me," Shinzui laughed. Despite Shun, being able to absorb the chakra, the chakra from the dome and the dense chakra housing Shinzui would make it difficult for any chakra absorbing techniques to absorb his chakra in a split of a second. Using the time required for absorption has a advantage, Shinzui took control over Shun, stopping him from absorbing the technique and by creating a clone of himself, the clone Shinzui used his absorption technique to absorb Shun.'' -

1.) Your "water dome" being able to withstand most chakra-absorbing techniques seems like a huge flaw. For one; if it is composed of a dense concentration of chakra, then it would be even easier to take from it, considering that there is a lot of the stuff present in the technique. Shun's jutsu could easily pull the act off.

2.) You basically auto'd my clone with that nifty technique of yours. You didn't even role-play your character gathering chakra to pull of the technique (which is S-RANKED). You didn't give me a chance to react, which would be more than possible, because Shun's Saigan would be more than able to detect the chakra coming towards him.

3.) Not even Pain, the Akatsuki leader who effortlessly destroyed a village, absorbed a clone. That is extremely god-mod. If not, it sure was over-powered.

4.) Not once did I say that I'm absorbing chakra from your technique in a split second.

Please. Fix your post. 