Board Thread:Naruto: Revolution Review Board/@comment-30241447-20180824231310/@comment-8914761-20180824232547

Alrighty alrighty, this story takes places, a boat load of years after Shikaku would have adopted your guy, but I guess that's going to be one of the things reworked. You aren't really giving us too much to go on about his reason he was a candidate for becoming Hokage. Scratch that, you aren't giving us anything to go about. You just said Sarada Uchiha passed him the torch. How did she pass him the torch? Why did she pass him the torch? How did she become Kage herself? Etc, etc. Also "cancerous" in an application, let's not make this a trend people.

Rework Jukan, explain how he climbed to the top, or create a new candidate. Everyone doubts you Neji, let's try and put the doubters to shame and make a character that'll make everyone go "well fuckin' damn, Neji actually made something I'm not mad at."

For now until you rework it.