Thread:Kazeyo/@comment-6383890-20140107091403/@comment-1520269-20140108010558

First of all, I appreciate your civility in light of your apps initial denial. To that end I'll try to get right to the point. The following notes the issues that I found with you application, some of which prevented approval:


 * The Kanji 音遁 are identical for Sound Release. This is something that can't really be alleviated, since their isn't a single kanji translation for "sonic." This isn't particularly debilitating issue, and the interpretation is reasonable, so I wouldn't stress it too much.


 * The fact the KG is an advanced nature, indicated by the presence of "Release" in its name, means that it must be an elemental KG. As such, you are required to provide what the base components of the advanced nature in question.


 * As for the abilities granted by this proposed KG, they are absolutely reasonable and fine. So reasonable, in fact, that I don't see why they necessitate a KG to be performed. Feats of manipulating sound have been shown on multiple occasions without any special bloodline. Your proposal is akin to suddenly having a Poison Release, when generating poison with your chakra is possible under normal means. This is to say that all the techniques you mention could simply be specialized sound based techniques unique to your character. Thus, there is no reason to complicate matters by throwing KG into the mix.


 * Finally, the awakening doesn't of these Sonic powers doesn't constitute a KG. KG abilities are born from the user's genetics, not something they were able to accomplish of their own will, or accident.