Thread:Sainami/@comment-25307776-20140312185202/@comment-5963425-20140316115613

Hey Long, I've judged your application together with one of my aides. Sadly, the conclusion has ended to a denial. The reason for the denial is the following:


 * I like the originality of the approach, however, the approach you've used is too far from the canon. If you would like to use this theory still, try to convert it into terms which are more appropriate to the Narutoverse.
 * Seen from the canon, all Rinnegan techniques are based on life (essentially yang) and yin-yang. Therefore, I’d advice to keep the abilities appropriate to what has been seen in the canon so far.

I will be judging your revised application after the ban has ended. If you want to write for the character, it's fine to do that in a sandbox. To make one create a new page named: User:LongPatrol35/Sandbox

Good luck.